visual art Drawing of a Human (Critique needed please!)

[Slice0Pie 815]

It's not the best drawing, it's not great, but I don't think its bad either! I Just started drawing Humans, im not going to be the best now, I'll improve ^.^ Anyways, critique is needed please! Thank you!

[child of the night 271]

It is a very great image however there is one problem that I am spotting, the chest is a bit too small for the rest of the body. Otherwise this is a great image and I think you should continue with your art!

[Odyssey 5,716]

Decent for a first try.

 

If you want my critique, you should learn a little bit of human anatomy, like taking classes or browsing pictures of the human skeleton. Your human has awkward legs and is a little too thin. Otherwise you should keep on trying, as this drawing is a good start to drawing humans. Also, I like her hair.

Edited October 8, 2014 by Mienshao

[yayayayayala 1,668]

She's cute, if a little tall and thin. You might want to try sizing down the legs a bit, and making the waist thicker, for more balance.

And I agree with Mienshao.

 

I like her hair.

[Flytee 237]

Most people don't bother with full body shots when they first start drawing  humans, I really admire the fact that you went for it.

 

Good point: The hair and face is cute, she certainly has a sweet personality. You have also drawn her in a innocent shy pose which adds to that personality, good job!

 

Advice: The body is a little awkward. I'd recommend looking at some tutorials! I particularly like this one because it shows a great technique were you use shapes to get the bodies proportions correct. I think it's a good method for people starting to draw. http://www.deviantart.com/art/Basic-Body-Tutorial-447875458

 

Once you get the proportions down and understand how the human body actually looks, you can start to be more stylized and experimental with your characters bodies, like in cartoons like Stevens universe and total drama island.

Edited October 8, 2014 by Flytee

[Christmasy Britty 2,553]

its good for a first try indeed though to critique I would work on the legs and the stomach area, the legs look too big for the small stature of the stomach so maybe add an equal amount to the stomach just to make it a fuller figure (lol that doesn't sound right)