Fluttershy (advice is always nice ^-^)

[FriendChip.Pon3 22]

HI GUYYYYS!! Only my second time posting my art here, but I think its REALLY fun so far! Anyways, I made a fluttershy, so let me know what you guys think! ^-^ 

 

 

Let me know especially, what you guys think of my pony bodies, because ive been trying to improve!

(also, should i start doing pixel art sig requests (like the one i have)?)

[Hovershy 3,815]

Looks really good! Nice work! 

 

You did a very nice job on her hair and her eyes. Her cutie mark is a little small though

[碇 シンジン 27,437]

Ooh ! This is great work my friend ! and I think that her body looks great ! 

 

Good job my friend! I like this art !

[Lady Leopardess 393]

That looks really cute!

The style suit fluttershy well! 

[Silverwisp the Bard 2,354]

Overall, pretty good, especially the colours.

 

-Unless this is supposed to be Fluttershy during S2E01, you have forgotten the wings

-the tail should sit a bit higher

-I'd make the the line inside her mane a bit shorter/thinner, it draws focus away from the face

-consider adding eyelashes (ponies tend to look pretty adrogynous without them)

-the linework is a bit wiggly in places

 

As for the body, its pretty tricky to tell from this perspective. I'd suggest drawing a bunch of ponies in different poses (running, jumping, flying etc. to get the hang of it (don't forget to post your work for feedback).

[FriendChip.Pon3 22]

That looks really cute!

The style suit fluttershy well! 

 

 

Ooh ! This is great work my friend ! and I think that her body looks great ! 

 

Good job my friend! I like this art !

Thanks guys! I appreciate it!

Overall, pretty good, especially the colours.

 

-Unless this is supposed to be Fluttershy during S2E01, you have forgotten the wings

-the tail should sit a bit higher

-I'd make the the line inside her mane a bit shorter/thinner, it draws focus away from the face

-consider adding eyelashes (ponies tend to look pretty adrogynous without them)

-the linework is a bit wiggly in places

 

As for the body, its pretty tricky to tell from this perspective. I'd suggest drawing a bunch of ponies in different poses (running, jumping, flying etc. to get the hang of it (don't forget to post your work for feedback).

Thanks! O-O I CANT BELIEVE I FORGOT THE WINGS... Ive been trying to find different liners to make the lines different thicknesses for different parts of the body, but all i have at the moment is a black sharpie that isnt doing me very well >~< (If you know of anything good to use, can you tell me?). I noticed i forgot the eyelashes too. I keep forgetting to add stuff to my pictures lately .-. Ive also noticed i need to slow down, and practice keeping my hand steady, ive gotten into a bad habit of rushing through stuff lately, ive been trying to break it. Thanks! ^-^ 

[Arctic Night 884]

I like how you used dark bold for the eyes. It looks very nice.

[Tameless 979]

Really like the pony's body outline. Also the cutie mark is great, maybe a little bigger next time. Her mane is great as well, love the length of it all. Overall it's very good. Keep up the drawing!

[The Mint Pone 2,294]

That's really good! The cutie mark is a bit too small but it's still great now draw flutter shy riding through hell on the back of Cerberus while wielding the sword of undoing! Okay... Maybe thats a bad suggestion.