writing This Inferno

[Prince Lightning Da Cute 619]

What is this inferno that surrounds me?

I should be anxious but I feel relaxed.

This is not the flames of fire no these are the flames of love!

It feels warm and the feeling is the best!

I loved being loved, being surrounded by these flames.

They spiral around me in a visious contest to win my attention.

The flames of my girl, my mare, my friends, my fans, my family and my fellow bronies.

There is no place I'd rather be than surrounded by this Inferno.

There truly is no better feeling than being loved.

Edited April 9, 2012 by TagTeamCast

[Marcato 2,143]

More poetry! Nice, i always loved poetry, and this one i can imagine being something some one would write for a story or book.

[Prince Lightning Da Cute 619]

More poetry! Nice, i always loved poetry, and this one i can imagine being something some one would write for a story or book.

 

Thank you my friend. It's not often this inferno surrounds me so I wanted to capture how I feel so I can relive it and show you guys too.

[Rainbow Danger Dash 145]

i think poems are for eggheads no offense

[Aureity 3,055]

"I loved being loved, being surrounded by these flames, spiralling around me in a visious contest to win my attention."

 

Just a suggestion, you might want to break that one line in two. It was a slight strain for my eyes to read, when they had gotten accustomed to your shorter lines.

[Prince Lightning Da Cute 619]

"I loved being loved, being surrounded by these flames, spiralling around me in a visious contest to win my attention."

 

Just a suggestion, you might want to break that one line in two. It was a slight strain for my eyes to read, when they had gotten accustomed to your shorter lines.

 

will do!