writing Madness

[Inkfeather 597]

Madness

 

 

Countless, failed attempts of mishap.

Madness and sanity walks hand in hand.

Seek refuge for the weak and wise.

The shelter from this world of pain.

 

This dark gateway to a mystical place.

Not to be found by any but everyone.

It takes you away, but never home again.

Search and believe in this better life.

 

The needle prick of pure satisfaction.

A droplet of thick, scarlet pleasure.

One streak of red on the pale beauty.

Always, forever changing the innocent.

 

Stolen treasure, taken by destiny itself.

Victim to torture of love and suffering.

This heart of the purest soul alive.

Living as a tool for the rise of madness.

 

Scratching the knees as you bend down.

Pick up, embrace the insanity of free.

Feel the freedom as the shining blade.

An eternal scar of joyful pain and lust.

 

All we must ever seek is the chaos.

Learn the true way of life's secret.

Bow low before the ruling discord.

Smile widely as the heart is pierced.

 

A misled attempt of tearful affection.

One soul, cracking deeply in despair.

Tides of shadows, of light and dark.

Ravaging the shores of our sanity.

 

Succumb to the mad as evil roams free.

Step down and surrender the life.

Rewarded, in pain as well as pleasure.

A needle prick once more in soft flesh.

[Vicke 3,189]

I really suck at poetry in general.

 

But i can say that its very well writen and definatly deserve more attention.

Good job mate.

[Mephala 2,633]

How this doesn't have more brohoofs and comments I'll never know.

You're very talented. I'm a huge poetry buff and I really enjoy yours. Keep up the stellar work.