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Tyra bit her lip as her teammates started piling into the portal, with Radiant putting on an armour spell before jumping in.

 

She took a look at Blizzard and gulped. "Another magic portal... are you ready?"

 

The wolf gave her a small nod and leaned back to pounce.

 

The mare nodded and mimicked the gesture. The two hopped in together, bracing for what might be on the other side.


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                                                                   Chapter V

 

 

 

After long battle against Scarlet, our heroes finaly found them self having an uper hoove. Until now, Scarlet was always able to escape to slipe from hoove's of our heroes, but now she got no were to run. They got her,exactly were they whant her, and now the finaly hour of her rain of terror is about to begine.

 

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After our group of heroes passed true the portal, they found them self in medium size room made entairly out of steel. This room was filled with lot of steel pipes thet by look of it had something passing true them next to thos pipes was one machine thet was, by looks of it, used to regulate pressure in side of thos pipes, this machine had couple of buttons and under them were orders thet this machine would do. Under the blu button was lower the pressure, under the red button was raise the pressure, next to them was an lever and next to it was writen speed, it probably was used for calucating speed of what ever was in thos pipes - currently this lever was set on midle (normal speed). Next to evrything els was another red button thet had glass casing, and on button was written in white letters "Stop.".

And on east side of room there was one dore thet was closed. If our heroes would to pass true thet dore they would find them self in long and dark hallway. 

By looks of it, this was not a trap but probably some kaid of malfunction of thos weird metalic creature down on the ground.

 

"600 meters until the impact." An life less voice said true the speeker thet was located in side of room our heroes were in. This speeker's were probably evry were around this airship and were used for quick passing of information. Life less voice contineued "Power level at 93%. Establish time until the reach our call under this circumstance is T minus 24 minutes."
 

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Tyra and Blizzard touched down on the other side of the portal with the others. The mare stumbled a bit, a look of nausea on her face, but she quickly shook it off.

 

"What is this place?" She asked, walking around the metal room while Blizzard sniffed around the floor. She gave one of the pipes on the wall a prod with her hoof. "All of this metal..."

 

She jumped as the voice sounded from seemingly nowhere, and she drew her axe with her eyes narrowed. "Who is there?! Show yourself!"


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After Ticktock had landed on the ground he stumbled for a bit trying to regain his balance, after that he put his hat back on his head and looked around the room they were in "Hmm ,looks like some kind of pressure regulation area or something. It's probably best we don't touch anything, for one we don't know what it does, and two I think we have the element of surprise." He then turned to Tyra as she began to shout at the voice "Tyra relax I think it's just an automated message playing through out the whole ship, no-ones there."   


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Ice landed on the other side of the portal with the rest of his team. He covered his ears when Tyra started yelling as usual, and took a look around. Before he could ask what the heck was going on, TickTock had already answered.  ​"Oh. Well isn't that convenient. So uh, where do we go from here?"


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Radiant looked around the room in thought there was one door on the far wall of the room. "Well we can take out chances of finding the control center of this ship within twenty minutes or if we damage something to look as if it were just a random fault we might get an engineer down to this room and they might have schematics or a map of the ship. Since a ship so large is probably broken into quadrants and subsections." He suggested looking to the group. "So what do you three think?"


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Tyra looked at Radiant, slowly blinking as the cogs in her head tried to turn and understand what in Tartarus he was saying.

 

"I have a better idea!" She declared, "I say that we look around this place for some kind of map! A place this large must have a lot of parts to it, yes?"

 

She beamed proudly, completely unaware of the total irony she had just projected. And it would probably be best not to bring it up.

Even Blizzard was looking at her with an expression of 'Are you serious right now?'.

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Ice listened to Radiant's idea. As usual, he thought his plans were good. But when Tyra chimed in, it made him blink. He surely wasn't expecting something like that. Although, he decided it'd b best not to worry about it. "Um...I think Raid makes a good point. We should probably search down whatever we can."


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Ticktock shrugged well there isn't really an other way to go about finding the control room, is there. Although if we can find of what side of the ship we're on we may be able to make some detailed guess as to the direction we should be heading in, for example the control centre of a ship this size is most likely in the centre and at the front, though that's most likely going to be the bridge up there."


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Radiant looked between the members of the group and back to the hallway. "Well we should decide quickly, if we lure somepony here it's a gamble they would have a schematic or they may be escorted by guards." He said before raising a hoof to his chin in thought. "Perhaps it would be best we begin moving for now avoiding confrontation so we don't bring the entire force on the ship after is."

 

Before waiting for acknowledgement from the group Radiant begun heading down the corridor


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​"No argument there," ​Ice said, while casually trotting after Radiant. ​"Come on, let's go guys!" ​He exclaimed before breaking out into a light jog in the direction Radiant was headed in. This place seemed strange to say the least, so it was best that they follow Radiant's guidance.


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Tyra's ears lowered and she frowned as nopony seemed to like her idea.

 

"I thought it was clever," she muttered.

 

Still frowning, she started trotting down the hall after Radiant, her ice wolf right behind her. She wasn't exactly comfortable, around all this machinery. Like some kind of other magic.

 

But she wasn't going to admit this to her group. She couldn't be nervous now.


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Ticktock nodded to Radiant "Yep let's get going!"

 

Noticing how down Tyra looked Ticktock gave her a part on the back "Hey it's not that your plan wasn't clever it was just that... it was... to good yeah thats it too good, we went for a diffrent because i dont think any of us could have done a good job at that plan except you because your obviously the best and strongest pony in the group."


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Our heroes walked true the corridor for about two minute before they were met with an big metalic dore thet were slightly opened.

 

If our heroes were to look insidle they would see seven ponys dresed in aetherblade armor. Some of them were carying tool boxes and some of em, by looks of it, were fixing and maintenanceing steal pipes thet were coming from the room out heroes left two minutes ago. By looks of it, there were no some high ranked aetherblade pirate in next room, so battle againts aetherblaes in next room wont be tough.

 

If our heroes were to look more around the room, from there place outside of this big metalic dore, they would find thet there was some kaid of generator in the midle of room thet pulsed magic energy in intervals of ten seconds. This waves of magic were not detectable by earth ponys or pegasus, because they were not wery strong, but unicorns could feel them.

Our heroes could see four cameras in evry corner of next room, this cameras were probably used by Scarlet to monitore aetherbaldes around the ship. This four cameras were covering almost evrything in the room, and so sneeking true next room would be realy chalinge.

 

Next room thet our heroes were about to enter from the south side, had two exits. One on the east side, and one on the north side. Next to both exits were signs. Next to the east exit, there was a sign thet said "Main Hall" and on north side said "Armory".

 

 

 

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Ice looked around the room, and noticed the generator. He blinked. This entire place was sure running in a weird fashion. ​"Let's be careful here, guys. Where do you think we should go next? Personally, I see no need for us to go to the Armory, so...yeah. But it looks interesting."


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Tyra slowly looked up at Ticktock as he started trying to cheer her up, still frowning with her ears lowered.

 

She blinked curiously, and then pricked her ears back up. "I have no idea what you just sai,d but I feel much better! My thanks, friend!" Her trademark grin returned as she grabbed the unicorn in a tight hug.

 

Entering the next room with the group, she focused on the first thing she saw - the Aetherblades doing maintenance on some pipes. Growling, she drew her axe and hunched over, dragging her hoof on the floor.

"I will take them on myself if I must," she offered, eyes narrowed at her potential opponents.


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Ticktock gave a sharp intake of air as Tyra hugged him, giving her a quick tap on the back before wiggiling his way out of the hug.

 

Ticktock nodded at Blizzard "I agree the armoury isnt our primary objective, although i think if we have the time we should give it a quick look, but i think what we need to focus on is a way to get into that room without those cameras spotting us." Ticktock then pointed at the visable cameras.


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​"You have a point there. We should go back and look at whatever we can, but for now let's keep going."

 

​Ice continued travelling forward, as they all had exited the room. ​"Oh great. I wonder who could be watching us this time. What, is it the NSA or some crap? Some kind of private company?"

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As Radiant peered into the room he could feel some sort of disruption magic emanating from the generator but it didn't appear harmful to them, part of him wanted to capture the armory and damage their equipment so further in if they were forced to fight it would be less weaponry available but at the same time they couldn't afford to create chaos and alert Scarlet. 

 

The unicorn then noticed Ice was already continuing down the hall and began to follow after the group only to notice the cameras. "We will need to stick to the shadows and underneath the cameras, if we damage them it will only draw suspicion." He whispered as he begun moving to the same wall so he was under the camera's view.


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Tyra's ear pricked up as she listened to Radiant's plan. Being an earth pony, she was unaware of any magical presence in the room.

 

"Cameras?" She blinked, and looked up at the corner of the ceiling, "Oh, aye! I see! We must not be seen!"

 

She began drawing her axe, until Radiant warned them not to destroy the cameras, which made her sheathe it with a pout. "Hmph."

 

She blinked as Radiant hugged the wall, and she casually walked right behind him, not getting exactly what he was doing.


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Ice blinked with confusion. Shadows? This only got more and more creepy as time went on. What kind of place was this that they needed to be hiding from cameras? This was crazy. ​"If you think it'll work, Raid, then let's hurry up..." ​he whispered as he moved under the camera's line of vision.


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Our heroes talked about there next move, they did not talk for long but it felt like a week has passed from moment they started to talk. And at the lest moment, as they were finaly finishing there plan one of Aetherblade engineer thet has seen Blizzard closing the dore behaind him, opened the dore and seen our heroes in the midle of hallway. For a moment she hesitated but finaly she shouted as loud as she could "Intruders! Intruders on the Britch-Maker!!!" And in just moment our heroes stelt was broken, and they lost anny options of doing this quaitly with out Scarlet, or annyone other on this airship knowing they were there.

 

As Aetherbalde engineer voice gone true the room, evryone turned around and faced the dore. Non of them could not actuly seen our heroes because of big dores thet open towered inside, so they slowly started to move towered the dore. Evryone from them picked up what ever was under there hoove at the time so they would not be defendless.

 

Cameras thet were in the corner of the room quickly turned to face the dore from whitch Aetherbalde engineer shouted, and from three cameras onli one was able to see our hereoes, but thet was inaf for one thet was currenly monitoring the cameras to know - Divine Fighters were on the ship. 

 

 

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Ticktock took a deep breath "Ok well there goes our element of suprise" Ticktock the brought out his sword "Ok guys let them come out to us, if we go to them then we get bottle necked making us easy targets, if we let them come to us, then they gat bottle necked."


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Couple of second pass with out anny side making some move. Even the one Aetherblade thet discovered our heroes did not made a move. But this quait waiting game broke an familiar voice thet was coming from the speakers "You waiting for a letter my dear Aether's?! DO YOU?!", this voice beacome much more loud as it was saying second part.

 

Aetherblades after hearing the voice yelling at them, they looked at each other, but onceas again no one made anny movement, but this was broken by an Aetherblaade engenier dashing towered our heroes with an hammer. She quickly dashed next to the scared Aetherblade thet yelled intuders and soon was stending in front of our heroes. And right after she made an week swing towered our heroes.


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Tyra's ears pricked up as the alarm sounded, and a smirk crossed her muzzle. No more of this 'sneaking around and not being seen' nonsense - now she could dive right into the fight!

 

She hopped in place and rolled her head on her neck, psyching herself up. "Finally! We can take the fight to these wrongdoers!"

 

Blizzard growled and raked her claws on the metal floor with determination.


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