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caliber rose up. "i got nothing, so lets so it." he grinned. 

 

he concentrated for a moment, and his sword burst into flames.

 

he started walking around, apparently aimlessly, dragging his sword on anything flammable. the forest quickly started to catch on fire.


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Second by second fire was geting biger and biger.It started to spred around wery quick,in al direction.And slowly it got out of control,dead trees and dead plants just bost fire spreading.Fire was all around clering,and contineu to spread in side of clearing,and out side.And if our heroes did not whant to be burned alive they should start to run back.

But our heroes had choise unlike this Djinn camp,they had no way out.As our heroes seen this litle Djinn village was filled with litle colts,old Djinn,un armed mares.And our heroes could hear how litle colts cryed for there parents as fire was geting closer,but childer were not onli one who cryed in fear,adults were crying and screming as well.But it was too late our heroes made fire and with it will kill lot of inisent lifes,fire was geting biger and soon it would kill all Djinn in side of there picefull village.

 

 

(I hope you are happy how,killing inisents for no reson.And you call your self a heroes...)

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Ticktock's eye twitched and he turned to Caliber and the face he had on was one of pure anger. Ticktock didn't say a word he just stared and Caliber. Ticktock then turned around and start to walk away. Inside his head Dark was surprised "Wow Tick even by my standards that's dark... and i'm the spirit of darkness."


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"The hell?" Caramel said furiously, her anger welling up again--not at anything in particular. "Why aren't they running away? How the buck is that fire trapping them like that? That backfired. No bucking pun intended--buck!" she said loudly as a fire nearly licked her. She flinched as she heard a particularly loud scream. Why? How did that fire trap them in such a circle around camp so they can't run away? At this point, not particularly fond of plant-ponies, she was more angry than concerned at the happenings, though there were healthy amounts of both.

 

The forest was beginning to burn profusely. She looked, torn, at the camp. She couldn't decide whether to go in and try to save that Djinn, his leaves and twigs burning as he screamed--or to leave. In a burst of heroism, she levitated the Djinn out of the deadly circle of fire--him still screaming and flailing, weakening her magic--and turned to the others. "We've got to get out of here," she said shortly. "Grab any plant-ponies you can--buck," she added as she almost caught fire due to the Djinn. She poured the last of her water in her saddlebags onto him, dousing the fire. He hung limp--he wasn't dead, she could tell, but nearly so. "We've got to get out of here." She turned and galloped after Ticktock, holding the fainted Djinn in her magic.

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Tyra scowled at Ice's condescending response to her question, even moreso at his idea to burn the Djinn out of their homes. They were doing nothing wrong to them.

Plus, where in the Hero's Realm was he carrying a bag of mulch?

 

She watched in horror as Caliber began setting the clearing ablaze, threatening to burn the Djinn alive.

"What are you doing?!" She yelled, "There are foals in that camp!"

 

While Caramel began levitating the Djinn to safety with her magic, Tyra leapt in to carry away any who were left.

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Red wanted to get angry at Ice Blizzard and Caliber but-- well, she had just earlier thought of the fire idea herself, though she hadn't suggested it.

 

A new thought occurred to her, suddenly, and she cursed herself for not thinking of it sooner. Sirens fed off negative energy.

 

Damn it. She thought, wanting to pound the ground. She closed her eyes and took a slow breath, calming herself. She turned to Ice.

 

"Okay, apparently we didn't think that through," she said, chuckling. "No one realized it would burn that quickly." She added that in case he felt bad. Now wasn't a time to feel bad, it was the time to act.

 

"Listen, Ice, can you try and use some ice magic to slow the fire? Obviously, the fire will melt it, but then it'll just turn to water. We should save as many djinn as we can." Red said. She didn't want them to panic about the siren yet.

 

She, Caliber and Tyra could jump in and save individuals while Caramel and Ticktock levitated them to safety, and Ice could cast his magic. Hopefully they could save most of the djinn...

 

A surge of guilt stabbed her again but she shook it off as she glanced at Caliber in a way that asked him to follow her in, and then jumped into the clearing herself, grabbing the scruff of one colt's neck, and swung another filly over her shoulders, and rushed out of the burning. Her fur singed a little as she charged out of the fire.

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Our heroes tryed to be heroes and tryed to salvage situation and save annything thet can be saved,but fire was geting biger and hoter.It becomed out of control,and was spreading fest in side of clering and out side of it.Air was geting ticker from dark smoke rising from flames,and fire burned evrything it toched,exept litle lake in midle of cliring,it stop there un toched,like something protected it from top.Screms and calls for help were becoming stronger as fire started to burn Djinn vilage.

Tyra was in side of flames and fire was geting biger and biger,if she whanted to act and save as some Djinn this could be her lest chance,because if she stayed in fire for lot more fire could burn her too.

 

Smoke from fire was geting high in air,maybi some one cold see it and come to help Djinn in this time of need...


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Tyra shook her head as the wild flames began to make her break into a sweat. She spotted a group of Djinn, adults and foals, and beckoned them over to her. She hoped they were the last ones.

"Come with me!" She called to them, "I will lead you to safety!"

 

The Djinn, with nowhere else to go, had no choice but to comply. They passed the mare, who ushered them away from the blaze and kept behind them to stop anypony straggling behind. The foals who couldn't run so quickly were propped onto her back.


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Tyra sucefully lead this small group of seven Djinn out,but much more were left begaind,and Tyra did not found anny more of them.But as Tyra got out of flames path befaind her was full of flames and another trip in could posibly kill her.

Our heroes should move back out,before flames could get around them too and cut there path to safety.

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Red winced as the fire broke out in an even stronger vigor. Damn! She called to a group of djinn, but they were split up from her from the fire. She pulled out her canteen of water and poured it on the fire, which created an opening for a split second, which was just long enough for the group of four or five djinn to rush out to her.

 

"Follow me!" She screamed. She didn't know whether they had heard her or not, but they understood.

 

Unfortunately, the fire seemed to have pretty much surrounded the clearing in a perfect circle at this point. She picked up one adult djinn and threw her over the flames. "Run!" She called to it. She grabbed a foal in her teeth and did the same. The djinn on the other end caught the foal and rushed away.

 

She threw two others. She was getting tired. Luckily, the djinn were light and did not weigh much, but the smoke was getting in her throat and rendering her very hard to breathe. She threw the last one over, but she threw him to low. The fire easily caught to his plant-like body.

 

She charged through the fire and, with a quick, panting, "sorry," stamped on his leg which had caught fire. He screamed, but she succeeded in putting out the fire.

 

He was pointing behind her. She blinked and turned, and saw as her tail swished behind her, that it was on fire. Well, what had formerly been her tail was on fire. As well as her flank.

 

She rolled around in the dirt, stamped on her tail, until the fire was put out. She breathed heavily on the ground for several seconds, exhausted. The burns were searing her skin, and dirt and rocks were getting into the raw skin. The wounds would probably get infected later. She needed to look at them, but she had a sick feeling in the pit of her stomach that those burns were going to scar. And her tail was probably mutilated and considerably shorter.

 

She got to her feet, panting. The fire was only getting stronger. She needed to get out. She stumbled a gallop back to the rest of the group, which consisted of Caramel, Ticktock, Caliber, and Ice-- she could see Tyra out of the corner of her eye leading away a group of djinn..

 

"Guys, we won't be able to save anymore without--" she was cut off as she began to cough. She'd inhaled to much smoke. She could feel unconsciousness at the brim of her mind. She pointed with a hoof, still coughing, away from the fire.

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Caramel wordlessly levitated Red and a couple of weak Djinn, who were too hurt, tired, or scared to move.  Her magic was beginning to strain at carrying four bodies at once. "We need to get out of here," she said, translating what Red said. She turned again, gesturing with her tail (acutely aware as she glanced at Red of her lack of one), and then trotted after Ticktock again.

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Fire was geting biger then trees around clering,and Djinn litle village already burned as Caramel pulled red out of flames,there was no more time for anny more rescu atempts.Our heroes should move away soon or fire will suround them and they will end same as Djinn on clering.


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Tyra watched in horror as Red was practically set ablaze, but managed to put herself out. Caramel had levitated them over to her.

The second she was on the ground, the viking dashed to her side, ignoring the stinging pain in her leg. "Are you well, friend?! Please tell me you are okay!"

 

She glanced up at the burning village. The flames were too large for anypony to get in...or out.

She lowered her head, ears drooping down, and put her smoke-covered helmet to her chest.

 

"I am so sorry..." She muttered, "May you all find peace in your next world."

 

With a sigh, she put her helmet back on, and propped Red onto her back.

"We must move on. There is nothing we can do." She declared, deliberately avoiding eye contact with Caliber.

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Blizzard couldn't believe his eyes. He had no intention of killing innocents. All he wanted was a bit of a flare for a distraction. But unfortunately, he didn't communicate it properly. And therefore another decision he made caused chaos before his very eyes.

 

He wasn't happy, "I bucking dishonered my clan code. I'm supposed to protect them.....but I didn't....God-bucking-dammit!!!" He picked up a huge rock, and threw it at a tree, knocking it over. He then fell onto his knees, then onto the ground on all fours, as he continuously slammed his right hoof into the ground out of anger, "NO. NO. NO. NO...."


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And as our heroes thinked all is lose ponys dresed in red started to araive from north-west.It was order ponys and frst ro araive to our heroes was Tybalts,he did not looked calm like alwys. "Quick take water buckets from thet machime.." he pointed out at some sort of circle machine filled with water "...we need to stop this waild fire before its too late."

 

 

(And y thinked i will let you become bad,help order put out fire,siren is gone,and stil lot of Djinn died from fire,~30% of camp was killed in flames)


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Blizzard grew happy when he saw the Order ponies come to help. Still, he would never shake the feeling of causing the agony of others via his own stupid ideas, "Oh, thank Celestia. You don't know how happy we ar to see you! Come on guys, let's put this thing out!" He said as he began to throw snow onto the flames.


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Tyra perked up as the ponies, all clad in red and led by Tybalt, arrived to provide assistance. She nodded and gently set Red down so she was laying against a tree.

"This pony requires help too," She called to the newcomers, pointing to her ally.

 

She sprinted over and grabbed a bucket of water in her mouth, trotting toward the flames and tossing the bucket into the inferno.


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Ticktock used his magic to levitate streams of water out of the machine which then began darting around the blaze leaving a trail of steam where ever it went. Ticktock still stood there angry and silent not uttering a word and not intending to after all this he intended to leave the team and never look back.


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Order and our heroes slowly put out fire,most of Djinn were safe but lot of Djinn,died in this fire.Clearing was full of steam and fire was gone,as same as siren thet was there.But there was something strange here,in midle where litle lake was now huge tower was,it looked like giant plant with wood structer around it.This was something you dont see evry day.

As our heroes sucefully helped put out fire,Order helped Djinn to move out of area,Tybalt slowly comed to out heroes as situation was geting back to normal,he was calm,and thet could be seen in his voice "Good thing we were close here,who know what could happen if thet wildfire cough tress in biger range.So what are you doing here,arent you suposed to meet out new comander in outpost nort-west from Hayseed forest?"


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Blizzard wasn't in the mood for crap. He did his best to keep a lid upon his anger as he spoke to Tybalt, "Yeah, yeah whatever. Keep your shirt on Tybalt. Do you know where exactly we need to go, or how to get there?" He asked inquisitively with a confused look upon his face.

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"For now take a rest." Tybalt started "You were heroes at this time,if I just think you weren here all of this Djinn would be dead now." Tybalt looked at tower thet was now in midle of clearing. "We are going to secure thet thing,and then you will come in.But our forces are split because we need to take care of all this hurt Djinn.So we may onli be able to secure litle inside." Tybalt started walking but turbed couple of fet away from our heroes "Just did you seen annything weird around here?We had rumors couple of siren romed the area."


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Red was exhausted, but she barely managed to stand up when Tybalt came. She didn't want his first or second impression of her to be her in this state.

 

"We--" she broke out coughing again, but stopped herself, rather annoyed. She must look pathetic... "we saw a siren, just earlier." she said carefully. She was grateful that the subject of the fire had been dropped. She suddenly wondered why they were here. Thank Celestia that they were, but if the Divine Fighters were sent here, why would the Order come, too? "We were actually looking for the siren when we stumbled upon the fire," Red said, lying easily. "It had come this way."

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Blizzard nodded sheepishly. He wasn't exactly the best at lying, but he quickly answered, "Um...yeah, that's correct. We followed that thing out here, but then we lost it on our way. So we infiltrate the tower? That's it? Well, I'm sure the bloodthirsty sirens will walk out and hand it to us, if we ask them nicely enough.


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"Aye," Tyra agreed, walking to Red's side in case she needed help in her weakened state, "We got here just in time to help these poor Djinn out of their homes."

 

She gave the cindering village one last mournful look, before looking to Red.

"Are you well, friend?" She asked softly, "Do you require help? You do not look well."

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Red was slightly amused by Ice's poor lying skills, but it was something to be respected, too.

 

She glanced at Tyra as her friend offered her the same help she had offered her friend earlier. "I am fine for now," she murmured, "I just need some rest. How bad--" she stopped herself before she could finish asking how bad her tail was.

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