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Radiant kept his attention fixed on the ship above waiting to see if they would respond. "Hopefully the ponies inside are more reasonable then the others we have faced previously." He said to himself continuing to stand tall not showing any weakness at all.


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As Radiant said they have no wepons,ship started to fire beams of light around him.And from every beam appered strange looking pony.They were dressed in white-black steampunk outfits.One of a ponys that comed out of elegant looking pegasus,she started walking to Radiant "So you are the one that Boss skinned from magic?I tough you will be taller.." more and more ponys started appering around the town "...I'm Mai Trin,and I hope you and your group get out from town with out fight.Boss really seems to like you so I dont whant to ruin her fun with you just yet."


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Blizzard then said, "*gulp* I'm not going in there.......! I have a better idea, what Raid said. Hehe, yeah let's just handle this situation with civility and who knows, maybe we won't end up having to fight a freakin' army and halfway die this time." Blizzard tried waving and jumping to get the ponies on the ship's attention, "I wonder what they're here for? If they say they come in peace, then why the huge ship floating over the town? :huh: "

He then sees ponies coming down, "Woah what the what?! Who are they?" He then thinks to himself, "They must work for that evil b**** who stole Tyra's axe, gotta stay cool and focused."

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Radiant looked at the Pegasus narrowing his eyes. "What do you want with this town? Don't think just because I don't have my magic I will just abandon the ponies of this city." He said watching her every move. "I would imagine your "boss" would of told you that would be my answer. So can we address this captain to captain and avoid bloodshed?"

 

Radiant kept hus composure even though he was being surrounded by more and more ponies.

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Tyra jumped back as the mysterious ponies appearing in front of the group, and narrowed her eyes at their leader's explanation.

 

"What do you want from us?" She demanded, stepping forward with a glare to look up at Mai, "If it is a fight, rest assured we will all give you one to remember!"


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Radiant glanced back at Tyra. "Tyra keep your head and stay calm, even though you're leader you can't go threatening them when they have cannons pointed at the city." He growled turning his attention back to the Pegasus.

 

"Please excuse her, she's got a bit of a short fuse. Right now it's just me and you who are talking." He said trying to null any hostilities Tyra may of caused.


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"My Boss told my to kill anny one that stand in my way..." beams of light stoped,but now in town where more than 50 strange looking ponys "...but she is having so much fun with you.I dont have heart to take that from her,so Im giving you one lest chance.Turn around,and you will live to fight another day"


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Blizzard laughed in sarcasm, "Psshh hahahahah!  :lol: Yeah right like we're gonna do that! Come on. Get real lady, you have no idea what we've experienced these last few weeks, if you had then you'd realize that we're not turning back for anything! But uh, that's your choice anyway."


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Radiant glared at the Pegasus. "I already gave you my answer to that request... not going to happen. You can kill me if you like but I don't thing you would find it worth attracting her wrath upon yourself." He said leaving forward toward her.

 

"Besides you have yet to answer my question, what is it you intend to do here?" Radiant inquired once again. He realized that his stubbornness was beginning to viewed as stupidity at this point, when it almost sounded like he was daring the mare to kill him.


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"Everypony SHUT UP!!!!" Yelled Ticktock he then calms down looking at Mia saying "Now I am sure there is a perfectly civil way to sort this out even if you work for and evil b%*£&. How ever as my friends so rightly said if you want a fight you'll get one" He then smirks pulling his goggles over his eye.


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Mai pulled thin,pointy sword and aimed at Blizzard neck "Keep quait kid,adults are talking..." he looked at Radiant "....We whant just to regrupe new members.....and kill others.Its simple as that." Big light beam hit ground right next to Mai and huge earth-pony with canon tied to his side walk out.


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Radiant quickly turns his head looking at Ticktock who seems as uncontrollable as blizzard. He turned back around looking at Mia "ignore that idiot, I'd prefer if we can come to an understanding of our circumstances before you start blasting the city because of certain loud mouths provoking an attack." He snarled toward the end glaring back at Tyra and Ticktock.

 

He quuckly.returned his attention to Mia.


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Blizzard didn't like being told be quiet and he whispered to Tyra and Tictock so only they could hear, "Stay on your hooves guys, a fight could break out at any moment so be prepared." He then saw the cannon pony and whispered again, "Ooooh yeah guys definitely prepares yourselves to rumble if need be." 

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Tyra glared up at Radiant, keeping quiet. He was right; they had cannons pointed at the city, and one wrong move would cause them to open fire.

And so, she backed off, and allowed him to speak.

 

She kept her glare fixed on the strange ponies as the conversation went on, and she perked up as the huge earth pony appeared. She began to growl at him, almost like an angry dog.

 

She snorted at Radiant's comment, looking up at him.


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He saw as another beam of light hit the ground and a hulking pony with a cannon on his side walked out. Radiant looked back at Mia. "Well killing is out of the question if you don't want trouble from us... Come to think of it, so is recruiting them for your heinous organization." He said looking back their sword and Blizzard. "Now lower your weapon from his neck. After that how shall we proceed?" He said calmly reaching into his saddle bag pulling out a sword hilt.

 

He held it in his mouth prepared to defend himself just in case. He had enough magic to.manifest his sword and keep it manifested for ten minutes.


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Ticktock quickly realised that he had become mad and could make the situation worse so he back off saying "Sorry Radiant" Then he looked at Mia and snarled "Fine ill back off but don't call me 'kid' again otherwise you will be in for it" He then backed off letting events unravel 


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"Dont wory about them.." Mai started as big pony aimed his canon on Radiant "...onli leader of group is what is matter,rest are just there to listen to the Leader.".Strange looking pony started to make circle around our heroes "Lest chance kid.Acept it and we will escort you to the train station."


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Blizzard's knees started to shake and backed off as well, "Moving...*backs up* Tyra and Ticktock, like I said, be prepared, I noticed Raid has his sword out, so yeah, being at the ready with our powers is the best thing we can do for now." He said as he charged himslef up a little.


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Radiant moved his eyes following the pony circling them. He looked back at Mai "You really think a death threat is going to change my mind? Even if you kill me these ponies that you keep looking down on can well enough handle any challenge you can throw at them." He said keeping an eye on both Mai and the cannon pony so he could defend himself if needed.


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Ticktock looks at Blizzard and nods "Yes we should indeed be ready for anything especially a fight, although promise me something I want to take Mai if there is one thing I hate it is being called a kid" Anger was beginning to sweep over Ticktock at this point and he wasn't sure how long he could hold back.    

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Blizzard reassured his friend, "Calm down bro. We'll all get our chance. Just keep you ears and eyes open, we don't know who exactly the are or why they're here. All we know is that the must work for that evil b*&^&@ who stole Tyra's axe. Come on Radiant we got faith in ya. Come on..."


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More and more ponys made there way around our heroes "They can handle anny thing Huh?.I beleve they cant do much when they are battleing with full armored group that have air suport." strange ponys pulled there wepons,actived there shields and stand in battle position "You are going to die,just walk away.I will tell you have put good fight and no one need to die today."


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Tyra's anger was building up inside her as she glared at the pony circling the group, then at the nearest pony who approached her when they surrounded them.

They had to work for the witch, there was no other explanation. And she wanted her axe back.

 

Now.

 

But, Radiant was right; any sudden moves could lead to hundreds of ponies' lives being put at risk, and her clan would look down on her should she abandon her creed for her rage.

 

So, she waited, dragging a hoof on the ground like a bull preparing to charge.


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Radiant stood his ground straightening his posture. "You keep saying you're going to kill me if I don't heed your warnings and yet... here we are still. I Guess you are more afraid of your boss then you thought, since it seems I'm her favorite "play thing"" he said still not sure what to expect if he keeps taunting them like this.


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Blizzard stood up, "Oooh no. Crap just got real! Get up Tyra and Ticktock, something's about to go down but don't start your motors just yet, I believe when the time is right, action should be taken...." Blizzard said as he charged himself up more and got into his fighting stance ready for anything.


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