request Evening Mist(need advice)

[Tom Snyder 4,112]

 

Im trying to come close as i can to Evening Mist, but it seems I'm not good at single strand manes. So i had to go with Lyra's as it was the closest to the image i made with Pony maker from general zoi, that was the reference i used. But now i ask you, is this good or should i change it? 

 

Before any mod/admins call me a liar again, these are my own models; i don't cheat by using other's programs. This is from my own personal program, so please stop harassing me about it. Its like if i saw you were an admin and called you out on it; saying you were untruthful. Thanks for understanding(if you do).

Edited April 17, 2015 by Candy Star