music Mother's Day Song

[Humble Hymn 90]

So mother's day is about a week away and I wanted to write a song before it leaves my head. What do you think? Should I make it longer or change it all together? Cause I'm still new at this and haven't written anything special like this.

 

If you like you can take it and say you wrote it if you want... just say I inspired you or something...

 

(hopefully the link works I've been having trouble with it)

mother's day 2015 link.rtf