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Just to confirm. And to clear any possible future problem.

Have you seen the change for my avilities dashian?

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Name - Ukkonen

 

Gender - Male

 

Age - 30

 

Race - Minotaur 

 

Cutie Mark - Minotaurs do not have cutie marks.

 

Power/Abilities - Ukkonen wields Raivo, a two-handed sword that was given to him by the elders of his tribe. Even though Raivo was meant to be wielded with two hands, Ukkonen can wield it with one because of his vast amounts of strength. Trained by his tribe's greatest warriors he is skilled with his blade.

 

In times of great need, Ukkonen can call upon the Ukko (a powerful minotaur wizard) to empower his blade with lightning. But in doing so, wielding it will damage Ukkonen over time so it is quite risky.

 

Description - Ukkonen is taller than the average minotaur. He has multiple scars for previous battles. When prepared for battle he wears a helmet and a singular shoulder pad as armor. Because he has leather like skin, attacks won't do as much damage, and because of this he doesn't need as much armor.

 

Personality - Ukkonen is not the most outgoing, he mostly keeps to himself. But if you get to know him you will find that he is quite friendly. It's not easy for Ukkonen to dislike somebody, but he generally has a grudge against assassins because of some events that have happened in the past (see backstory).

 

Backstory - Ukkonen was raised to be the Chieftain's guardian. Because of this he was given special training from the greatest warriors of their tribe. Finally, when he came of age, he was given  the blade "Raivo" by the elders. This blade was believed to be forged in the heart of the sun by Ukko (a powerful minotaur wizard) himself. 

 

Years passed after Ukkonen became the Chieftain's guardian. The Chieftain was murdered in the night by an unknown assassin. Because he was unable to defend the Chieftain, he was called a disgrace and banished from the tribe never to return again. But there was one way that he could restore his honor, avenge the chieftain by slaying the assassin that killed him. Now Ukkonen is a mercenary, accepting missions often, hoping to finally find the assassin.

 

 

I would say that this is good enough of a first OC description, though I'm not very good at writing personalities or descriptions. There's most likely some mistakes in this since I wrote it in about an hour or two. 

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I could always try tone him down a little bit (he is pretty much far from finished I would say). There's definitely some things that I want to change about him, but I'm going to do that later.

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A plan you say? hmm... Now I'm curious. I guess I'll see eventually. And just so you know, I normally am not on the internet from 3 PM to 5 PM PST, I don't know if this will be of any importance though.

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