louisvillepride request

[Katie Fire 158]

This is a request for louisvillepride

I am looking to improve my skill so I'm happy for any feedback or requests

 

[dragonsponies 101]

this is looking great, aside from the roughness of the lines that is. are you using a mouse to draw or a software that only has thick lines? because the smoother the lines the better (in my opinion at least unless you're going for that sketchy look)

the difference between male and female character is easy to see here. which is important, i started out drawing Only male characters which makes it hard for me to draw female characters even now. so it's good that you have a grip on it.

 

another thing, when ears are pointed downward --regardless of it beeing in affection or distress-- it's more rounded out like this:

 

also make sure to remember that hair looks different from the front then it does from the side. with AJ it seems like the hair is done from side perspective while she's shown from the front. though it's probably because her hair is stuck against the stallion

 

you did a great job on this really, i'd like to requests something to if you're not to busy by the way :3

[Katie Fire 158]

this is looking great, aside from the roughness of the lines that is. are you using a mouse to draw or a software that only has thick lines? because the smoother the lines the better (in my opinion at least unless you're going for that sketchy look)

the difference between male and female character is easy to see here. which is important, i started out drawing Only male characters which makes it hard for me to draw female characters even now. so it's good that you have a grip on it.

 

another thing, when ears are pointed downward --regardless of it beeing in affection or distress-- it's more rounded out like this:

 

also make sure to remember that hair looks different from the front then it does from the side. with AJ it seems like the hair is done from side perspective while she's shown from the front. though it's probably because her hair is stuck against the stallion

 

you did a great job on this really, i'd like to requests something to if you're not to busy by the way :3

This is a lot of great advice thanks a lot

 

I'm not too busy at all. What do you request?

[dragonsponies 101]

i'd like it if you could draw this guy right here while sitting. 

wanna see how you do that one

 

if you want i can request something that isn't an OC as well if you'd rather have that :3

i'd understand that cause drawing OC's all the time can get boring

[Katie Fire 158]

How is this? (character using up)