Memories... (a sad story)

[Dark Fang 17]

Hi my name is Dark Fang I enjoy writing stories and poetry I mainly like to write dark or sad stories this is a short sad one called "Memories..." I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it let me know what you thought of it your feedback is very important to me and if you haven't already be sure to check out my other story "Mirror..." ok enough talking lets get into the story enjoy

 

Memories...

 

His beard grows bushy and face gone pale, he looks outside all he sees is the hail. It rains heavy both day and night, his body grows weary unable to fight. He wishes it was him that was taken that day, with life comes death a price we must pay. He looks at the picture of the one that he loves, so soft, gentle and as delicate as a dove. So he cries and cries he hurts so bad, the picture is of a girl who once called him dad...

[Dark_Moon 14]

Amazing. Very well written.