Long Live the Frontier - An MLP Fan comic

[FullMetalParagon 80]

Hello, all! I know I haven't been on here in a long time, but I would like to take the time to post my comic.

 

http://longlivethefrontier.thecomicseries.com/

 

Long Live the Frontier takes place far in the future, much longer after the show. While I can't tell much without spoiling the next few pages that are in the works, I can say it's going to be good!

 

The main character is Deadwood, somepony I haven't even brought out to dust off in a long time.

 

As this is only the first page, it's a style I have not used in so long, it's alien to me, but not so alien that I cannot use it.

 

So, what do you think?

[FullMetalParagon 80]

New page is up, bringing the first chapter up to two pages. Comics are a blast to draw!

[FullMetalParagon 80]

I'm gonna bump me own thread now, if that's all right.

 

I'm actually wondering if people are just going, "Oh, this is coo- wait, this is hand drawn. Never mind, I should not bother with this trifle." It seems that's the way that LLtF goes, but as soon as I mention Shadows of Abaron, some people I know have lost their minds at knowing that it was me who drew that one.

 

I'm just... confused, is all.

 

I'm looking for actual constructive criticism, because I've gotten the whole "hurr durr, this is terribu in every way-desu" comments. (I actually got one from someone like that, and it was kind of irritating, to be honest.)

 

Now that THAT is said, I know I'm not the best artist out there, but I do want to get better, and the only way to do so is to see where people think I might be able to improve.

[FullMetalParagon 80]

Now that I've discovered that people enjoy my art, I've not seen anyone actually even take a look at this.

 

New page is up, by the way.

 

Now we get to see how Equestria ENDS.

 

No, it's not going into NSFW territory, but it DOES get dark.

 

Like... end of the world, sun exploding dark.

 

http://longlivethefrontier.webcomic.ws/comics/

[PROJECT: Simon 3,955]

I like that pony with a hood at the first page xD

[FullMetalParagon 80]

That would actually be Deadwood.

 

And thanks for commenting, Simon.