visual art Monster OCs Design Feedback?

[Chann3l Chas3r 367]

Since nobody ever reblogs art on tumblr and DA couldn't seem to give less of a toss, I figured I'd post here and see if anyone had some feedback on these character's designs?  They're gonna be the main characters of a webcomic I'm working on in a world populated by mutants, monsters, and modern magic.  Still trying to piece together an overarching plot, so it's just gonna start out revolving around Lagtime (L.T.) and Bruce as characters sharing an apartment. /shrug

 

Need to do more art for Bruce, I've got a lot of unfinished junk.

 

Edited August 29, 2015 by Lagtim3

[LiraCrown 1,807]

I really like L.T.

Takes several commonly used character characteristics and really makes something pretty unique design-wise. He looks a bit modge podged, and I'm saying that in a good way. Bruce seems a bit more generically designed, that said the color and overall look is pretty spot on, its cohesive. What will make or break him I think relies on overall personality choice.

 

Shake you don't get the feedback you'd like on other sites. I know what that's like XD

But it looks like you do interesting work.