Design OC Help

[Tao 7,795]

So I made a oc just once more on the random but also a bit of a rebirth of my one of my old ocs: Gem Sprite.    Given her the name of White-Rain and did the colors first in the Pony Maker than I redid her myself in the mane and tail and etc I really wanted.    Just wondering on some feed back in what I might change for colors:

 

Whiterain

Type:  Unicorn

Birth Home: Canterlot

New Home: Crystal Empire

Job: Scout in the Army and body guard.

Age: 25

Magic Color: Storm gray

Talent: Foresight

Cutie Mark: A crystal ball shining softly.

 

Pony Maker

 

 

My own Rough

[Lunar Echo 10,335]

How can something so cute be a protector of others She's like a fluffy marshmellow

[DormantAccount 308]

Very pale I'd suggest maybe making the blue streak a little darker or less washed out so she pops a little

 

The mane has kind of a rough front and a smooth bit along the side. A nitpick though.

 

Other than that the design looks good. Those purple eyes really pop.

[Tao 7,795]

How can something so cute be a protector of others She's like a fluffy marshmellow

Kinda half the point a bit given she looks.

Very pale I'd suggest maybe making the blue streak a little darker or less washed out so she pops a little

 

The mane has kind of a rough front and a smooth bit along the side. A nitpick though.

 

Other than that the design looks good. Those purple eyes really pop.

Thanks, i thought of making her hair a bit more blue in part a bit and i need to work on her hoofs but its a rough.