I need help starting a fanfic

[Artimis Whooves 1,576]

As the title says, I need help starting off. I have the whole story planned out, It's just the beginning, It just doesn't sound right to me. Please help!

[Koinonia 18]

Well, what kind of help are you specifically asking for? Someone to read and make suggestions on the beginning that you already have, or that you are going to write? More info needed.

[Artimis Whooves 1,576]

That I'm gonna wright. I keep deleting the beginning because it just doesn't sound right when I read it back over it.

 

 

It is a mlp/kingdom hearts fic...

[PoisonClaw 8,164]

Then skip the beginning and just come back to it later. Write the middle or even the end first if that feels more comfortable to you. In the first chapter of my latest story, the beginning was literally the last part i finished.

Edited October 25, 2015 by PoisonClaw

[Artimis Whooves 1,576]

the part of the beginning that i'm stuck on is the introduction, pretty much the first couple of lines...

[Idris 241]

Yep, leave it for now and crack on with the rest. I've put a whole chapter in front of my first line before now. There's no harm in it