drama Luna's decent into darkness chapter 1

[Batchaction 9]

Story about Luna and her struggles this is chapter 1

 

I did the editing and added detail to the story - Batchaction 

 

my roommate wrote the original story, put it to paper - ForsakenKnightmare

 

my brother helped review and edit the story - Namamazu

Chapter 1 final mix.doc

Edited December 25, 2015 by Batchaction

[Batchaction 9]

IF YOU DO END UP READING THIS PLEASE LEAVE A CRITIQUE!!!!!

Edited December 26, 2015 by Batchaction

[Rye Snoot 2]

ehhh not what I had in mind in the download...  >.>  but everything always starts out decent for now.... if you put more time in it and post the writing here instead of a download it might look more better >.>

[inactive user 79]

Just a note, 'Luna's Decent Into Darkness' should be 'Luna's Descent into Darkness"