critique wanted So I made a second video about Spike

[Partialgeek514 5,011]

So I made this video about if and when Spike will become an adult. It's also my first video with an OC! I'd really love some feedback!

 

[Midnight Chimes 69]

Hi, it's always good to see another small analyst out there like myself. Hopefully we can grow together until one day Silver Quill will be forced to bow down before us... Seriously though, I enjoyed watching and I have left some feedback in the comments.

[ManaMinori 4,146]

So I made this video about if and when Spike will become an adult. It's also my first video with an OC! I'd really love some feedback!

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ux17LHMJs3A

this video actually answers why Twilight was given Spike's egg. Pretty flawless evidence, if you followed the comics and Equestria Girls.

 

https://youtu.be/3DtXC1mWCXc

[Night Silent 93]

I believe that a wingless dragon, is a Wyrm. Of course, I could be wrong. That is just what I have heard all my life. Also, great background music!

Edited January 14, 2016 by Night Silent

[Partialgeek514 5,011]

this video actually answers why Twilight was given Spike's egg. Pretty flawless evidence, if you followed the comics and Equestria Girls.

 

It's a cool theory, though I admit I've read very very little of the comics.