ooc Midnight in Manehattan (Action, mystery, crime)

[Illiad Easle 3,165]

@,@@crispy fries,

 

Hold up now, there are no nearby windows. Swift's room is in the center of the building, which I specifically stated did not have a window.

 

Also the inability to fully retaliate as the next post confirms the zebra's capture leaves me unable to move the scene.

 

I'm going to need a bit of clarification on this happening before I can post.

 

Can I just write what I wish so long as the zebra is captured in the end? That would be simple enough I suppose.

Edited March 1, 2016 by Illiad Easle

[Guest]

I'll change the post a little to fix the lack of windows.

[Illiad Easle 3,165]

@,

 

Thanks, that was quite the turnaround. I should have had them killed when I had the chance. Pesky mercy. I did not expect your betrayal quite so soon, but I should have.

 

@@crispy fries,  

 

This story certainly took a turn I did not expect, well played.

[Guest]

Oh boy, what a mess.

 

Salleria hasn't left the area, she's gonna try to take back swift as well.

 

The swat team was enough to take back Janeri.

 

I'm assuming they were not enough for the changelings. Salleria is assisting them, as there were orders from steel to take Swift, too

[Illiad Easle 3,165]

@,

 

Are those comments on my post?

 

I can see that I may have misinterpreted your post, I'll adjust accordingly. It's @@crispy fries, post that caused the most confusion as it seems to put the event in the past.

[crispy fries 432]

@@Illiad Easle,

 

Crap, was I the one who screwed up? I was saying where Janeri had been taken after he had been arrested.

[Illiad Easle 3,165]

@@crispy fries,@,

 

I adjusted my post, hopefully this fixes things. I think I understand what's happened now. 

[crispy fries 432]

@@Illiad Easle,

 

Alright, glad everything's cleared up.

[Guest]

@@crispy fries,

 

updated the post 

[crispy fries 432]

@@Illiad Easle,

 

I was thinking that the message could get to the princesses at the end. Seems like it would put a nice bow on the ending.

[Illiad Easle 3,165]

@@crispy fries,

 

Alright then, I'll get the changeling plans moving in the meantime.

 

There is an important descriptive element that I'm leaving out until a character would actually notice the difference.

 

Also, I just noticed that I have 10 more posts than the two of you combined.

Edited March 2, 2016 by Illiad Easle

[Guest]

Should probably explain what's happening. Salleria is tipping prince blue blood off about the artifact, so that he would buy it and get Steel the money. However, she will also steal it from him once the situation was over. Hence her 'plan'

[crispy fries 432]

@@Illiad Easle,

 

I was going to have the detective start a manhunt (I guess the correct term would be pony hunt) for Steel, so helping him could be could be what Swift does next.

[Illiad Easle 3,165]

@,

 

I hope you don't mind me shooting at you. It still falls under non engagement with Steel until after you deliver even if I manage to hit your wings.

 

If you do mind I can change it a bit. 

[crispy fries 432]

@@Illiad Easle,

 

Hold up. Salleria is in Canterlot right now.

[Illiad Easle 3,165]

@@crispy fries,

 

She's heading to Manehatten correct? I assumed she was and then would eventually come into view. 

[crispy fries 432]

@@Illiad Easle,

 

Well, that's up to @, also, I was going to use the hunt for Salleria as an opportunity to start wrecking the mafia because of some future plot reasons. I kinda can't do that if we immediately find stuff out.

[Illiad Easle 3,165]

@@crispy fries,

 

There's no reason to say that the other teams aren't wrecking the mafia while Zeb and the detective attempt to track the griffon. Maybe she drops low after being shot at so she can't be followed so easily. Leaving them back at square one when she loses them, so they go back to their original plan and both Zeb and Swift get more frustrated that she escaped for the second time? 

Edited March 2, 2016 by Illiad Easle

[Guest]

This is difficult.

 

Yes, Salleria is heading to Manehatten to hand steel the key and complete her mission. I don't mind you shooting at me. Heck, I don't even mind Swift confronting her in Manehatten so long as the key gets delivered personally.

 

I can't reveal much stuff now, unless you want spoilers to the plot.

[crispy fries 432]

@@Illiad Easle,

 

Sure, that works out.

[Illiad Easle 3,165]

@,@@crispy fries,

 

I'm glad.

 

I'm especially good at planning plot points, mostly. 

[Guest]

I'm actually really, really excited because this RP is probably going to be the only RP that will ever be finished with a satisfying conclusion.

@illiad

 

Hmmm, could we arrange for Swift to meet Salleria?

[crispy fries 432]

@,

 

Since the detective knows who Swift is, he could arrest Salleria and take her to him.

Edited March 2, 2016 by crispy fries

[Guest]

But then the key won't get delivered to steel

[crispy fries 432]

@,

 

Chain Break could show up and take the key from her.