ooc Midnight in Manehattan (Action, mystery, crime)

[Guest]

Fair enough, but not a direct arrest though. Maybe a confrontation in an alley, because of what's gonna happen next....

[crispy fries 433]

@,

 

Sure, but shouldn't we rescue Janeri before the big thing? BTW, I have to go to bed now.

Edited March 2, 2016 by crispy fries

[Guest]

Detectvies can rescue Janeri. Salleria will rescue Janeri after meeting swift or something.

[Illiad Easle 3,255]

@,

 

Swift fully intends to at least try to kill the griffon when he meets her. You're going to need to think of some interesting argument to stop him.

 

I know it's likely important to the plot that you live, but I like to keep vengeance realistic. 

 

I'm going to wait for @@crispy fries, to make the detective's next move before I bring Swift into action.

Edited March 2, 2016 by Illiad Easle

[Guest]

Lol. Ok uh, the warrior is actually a boss from a game called borderlands 2. I'll just give a rundown of it's abilities from what I can remember.

 

> can fly

> shoots lasers from tail

> breathes fire

> can slam the ground to cause earthquakes... I think? Nah, common sense

 

Oh, and do you think we should have the princesses come in?

[crispy fries 433]

@,

 

Let's have them show up at the end.

[Guest]

I don't want to sound crazy but holy fucking shit this is the first RP I've seen that actually ended properly.

[crispy fries 433]

@,

 

This is the first RP I've ever finished, so I don't have anything to compare it to. How do these things usually end?

[Guest]

People lose interest but don't write themselves out, or someone just doesn't post. Basically, the RP gets abandoned. I have never seen an RP finish its storyline.

 

Sequel?

[crispy fries 433]

@,

 

Maybe, maybe. PM me and we could do some brainstorming.

Edited March 3, 2016 by crispy fries

[Guest]

Just discuss here. Illiad could have some ideas of his own

[crispy fries 433]

@,

 

Alright. At the moment, I got nothing. Do you have any ideas?

[Illiad Easle 3,255]

@,

 

I like the idea of a sequel, I think there's enough loose ends that we could tie together into a new story.'

 

Swift's hunt for the griffon

The princesses actually doing something

 

I could come up with more if you guys are interested.

[crispy fries 433]

@@Illiad Easle, @,

 

Salleria could be a fugitive and we could have a story about that.

[Illiad Easle 3,255]

@@crispy fries, @,  

 

That would make a decent underlying plot, we'd need a motive.

 

Is she just running from Swift? Or the Law as well?

If from the law, why?

 

I do think there is potential for story in the rebuilding of Manehatten and the fact that the citizens know the city is full of changelings now.

[crispy fries 433]

@@Illiad Easle, @,

 

She could be running from the law because she was associated with Steel. Also, should we let any new people join?

[Guest]

That sounds ok. I can work with that. Do we start a new ooc or...

Salleria would be pursued by the law only if it becomes known that she was largely involved in the incident. I'll think up a reason for her to e

In equestria again. Perhaps they cross paths o another mission

[Guest]

I think 3 people is enough for the RP already.

[Illiad Easle 3,255]

@@crispy fries,@,

 

I'm up for adding new people, We don't have to make a new ooc as this could just be a continuation of the last one, a part 2 so to speak.

 

Though it would be less confusing to newcomers if we made a new ooc.

Lets plan it first and see if we want to add people, a good premise is key to a good RP.

Edited March 4, 2016 by Illiad Easle

[crispy fries 433]

@,

 

I'm cool with adding new people. I've got to be someplace soon, so I won't be able to post for a few hours. You can bounce some ideas around with @@Illiad Easle, in the meantime. Don't start stuff without me.

Edited March 4, 2016 by crispy fries

[Illiad Easle 3,255]

@@crispy fries,@,

 

3 is a good number, and we already know each other as reliable posters so there is less fear of it dying out. 

[Guest]

Imagine if we used different OCs this time, but have the original OCs return during the story to move it forwards. Sorry, I really love borderlands.

[crispy fries 433]

@, @@Illiad Easle,

 

Using new OCs is a good idea. If reliably posting is an issue, do either of you know anyone who posts frequently?

Edited March 4, 2016 by crispy fries

[Guest]

Mentissololiquy. I bet that name is spelled wrongly.

[crispy fries 433]

@, @@Illiad Easle,

 

Maybe a condition for new people joining could be that if they don't post for too long, their character gets killed.