critique wanted A Show-Accurate Vector?

[PacificGreen 1,163]

Just an idea I had, since both characters are voiced by Peter New. I guess it's a voice actor joke?

 

Anyways, I'm not exactly great at making show-accurate vectors, so I'm looking for your feedback. This one is half traced-half non traced (if that makes sense), but are there any tips you guys can offer to make it look more like in the show?

 

Also, I know he doesn't have his cutie mark, and that that portion of his leg doesn't have the stroke. I'll fix those up in the final draft.

 

EDIT: Ah, forgot to click "Attach This File". Lemme try again.

Edited February 29, 2016 by PGNatsu

[MDLineArt 93]

At first glance, it looks very show-accurate!

Wish I was a Vector-Artist, you're making me jealous now

[On-Locoweed 108]

You may consider placing the wing a little lower on the body. Peruse some other pegasi stallion vector art for reference.

[Jonny Music 3,458]

That is definitely very show-accurate. I wish I knew how to vector myself. Alas, I'm only good at modifying vectors and editing them in Photoshop. I have no idea how to vector from scratch with Adobe Illustrator (assuming you were using Illustrator).

[PacificGreen 1,163]

  On 2016-03-01 at 3:48 AM, Jonny Music said:

That is definitely very show-accurate. I wish I knew how to vector myself. Alas, I'm only good at modifying vectors and editing them in Photoshop. I have no idea how to vector from scratch with Adobe Illustrator (assuming you were using Illustrator).

 

I use Inkscape. I think it's still pretty good considering it's free. 

[Jonny Music 3,458]

  On 2016-03-01 at 4:20 AM, PGNatsu said:

I use Inkscape. I think it's still pretty good considering it's free. 

 

Are Inkscape files compatible with Adobe Illustrator?

[PacificGreen 1,163]

  On 2016-03-01 at 4:24 AM, Jonny Music said:

Are Inkscape files compatible with Adobe Illustrator?

I'm not really sure; you'll have to either Google search it or ask someone who actually has that program

Also, what do you guys think of the proportions? I feel like that's my biggest concern...that and stroke width.

Edited March 1, 2016 by PGNatsu

[Jonny Music 3,458]

  On 2016-03-01 at 4:52 AM, PGNatsu said:

I'm not really sure; you'll have to either Google search it or ask someone who actually has that program

Also, what do you guys think of the proportions? I feel like that's my biggest concern...that and stroke width.

 

Ok.

 

When it comes to strokes, all of them are great except for the stoke on the ear. The stroke on the ear is a bit too thick. That's the only problem I notice.