Cuddles!

[TerminalObsession 250]

So, my friend asked me to draw her OCs. Then I did. The lovely cream mare is Autumn, and the blue pegasus is Rain Drop. Autumn likes cuddles! 

 

 

Any critique would be appreciated!

[Denim&Venöm 20,442]

You may want to fix autumns cutie mark. It looks like it's going down her leg. And perhaps give them bigger mouths cause I can barley see those smiles. I can't tell if Rain drop is smiling or frowning. And maybe more definition in the muzzles, cause their faces sorta look humanish. 

 

Don't be dissuaded. Keep working on it.  

[TerminalObsession 250]

You may want to fix autumns cutie mark. It looks like it's going down her leg. And perhaps give them bigger mouths cause I can barley see those smiles. I can't tell if Rain drop is smiling or frowning. And maybe more definition in the muzzles, cause their faces sorta look humanish. 

 

Don't be dissuaded. Keep working on it.  

Ah. I made the lines too pale; I'll definitely making them more defined next time. That's the main problem I can see. Thanks for the criticism, I'll be sure to keep it in mind next time.

[ambergerr 77]

Aww, so cute! My only feedback is, like Denim&Venom said, is the cutie mark is a bit low on Autumn. I love how Rain Drop's front legs are crossed, that's a nice touch, as well as her wing on Autumn's back. Great job, keep at it! 

[Kenshiro 13,499]

They seem so skinny. You should fed them up a little