critique wanted Fanfic Idea feedback.

[Gamer_KM 90]

So this Idea came to me a while back, and pitched it was a game(that ended badly) SO shifting gears a bit.

 

So the story is called "The Life Of Mary Sue", It is a semi self aware slice of life story, It follows the title character, Mary sue, as she fights the up hill battle that is her destiny. It takes place in a little Subspace called the nexus, a place where all storys(and worlds) Connect. She is going to an Academy For OCs, where they learn......well to be OCs, and how to survive in the multiverse. Her roommate is Nyx from past sins in the Alicorn dorm.

 

The Plot is a bit in the air, i Kinda know how I want it to end, but other then that, i am open to Ideas.

 

Also another note, I am not, i repeat NOT looking for OCs as of now, when I am, I'll let people know.

[Valeska 184]

Hmm. Sounds interesting. So I take it Mary Sue is literally a Mary Sue kind of character and she wants to stand out?

[Gamer_KM 90]

Hmm. Sounds interesting. So I take it Mary Sue is literally a Mary Sue kind of character and she wants to stand out?

Well yes and no, yes is has very mary sue traits, but she hates it to NOT be unique