ooc The Seven Hearts (OOC)

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I would, but unfortunately, Pluto still believes it Alicorn season. And due to that, and the fact that I like your OC, I just can't accept it for safety reasons.

 

I really didn't expect you to take it seriously. Thanks anyways, I'll take Mr. Rock to higher waters!

[Flow 1,629]

I'll just ask you, what do you think of this OC?:

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/starry-sky-r89

[Tom The Diamond 1,830]

I'll use this one, I'll have to write a backstory for my main one.

That's going to take from sunup all the way till dusk is done.

 

Alright, well, aside from being a bit short(Though from that last note i it I'll assume its still a bit of a work in progress) Everything else checks out pretty OK, so accepted!

I really didn't expect you to take it seriously. Thanks anyways, I'll take Mr. Rock to higher waters!

 

Make sure you do, it'll be one less life claimed by Pluto!

I'll just ask you, what do you think of this OC?:

http://mlpforums.com.../starry-sky-r89

 

Well, one of my mane problems is that her Cutie Mark is waaay to elaborate. Cutie Marks have simplistic designs, and 54 Detailed stars is not very simplistic. Now, if it was like, 5 small stars in the shape of the little dipper, that would be nice. But 54 is... quite a lot for one flank.

 

Aside from that, the rest of her design is fine, and backstory-wise is a bit bareboned, and missing a few periods. Also, a University in Ponyville? I'd be surprised if they had a college, let alone a University. I'd recommend changing that to a bigger pony city, like Fillydelphia, Manehatten, Canterlot, etc.

 

Anyway, that would be my opinion, hoped it helped!

[Flow 1,629]

 

Well, one of my mane problems is that her Cutie Mark is waaay to elaborate. Cutie Marks have simplistic designs, and 54 Detailed stars is not very simplistic. Now, if it was like, 5 small stars in the shape of the little dipper, that would be nice. But 54 is... quite a lot for one flank.

 

Aside from that, the rest of her design is fine, and backstory-wise is a bit bareboned, and missing a few periods. Also, a University in Ponyville? I'd be surprised if they had a college, let alone a University. I'd recommend changing that to a bigger pony city, like Fillydelphia, Manehatten, Canterlot, etc.

 

Anyway, that would be my opinion, hoped it helped!

 

Ah, okay thanks for your opinion

[Tom The Diamond 1,830]

Ah, okay thanks for your opinion

No problem! ; )

 

Also, I realized that I forgot to update with Aureitas, sorry about that, and hey, we only got one spot left! Yay! As soon as we get that one filled, we can start this off! : D

Edited May 12, 2012 by Tom The Diamond

[Flow 1,629]

I changed her cutie mark to the seven stared Big Dipper constellation, I might edit her backstory more

[Tom The Diamond 1,830]

I changed her cutie mark to the seven stared Big Dipper constellation, I might edit her backstory more

Your OC looks much nicer! Little details like that really do end up making a big difference! ^ . ^

 

In other news, we still need one final pony to join... Granted, if we need to, we can just go ahead and start the RP with 5, but I like 6, it's a nice even number.

[Prince Lightning Da Cute 619]

 

Your OC looks much nicer! Little details like that really do end up making a big difference! ^ . ^

 

In other news, we still need one final pony to join... Granted, if we need to, we can just go ahead and start the RP with 5, but I like 6, it's a nice even number.

 

My first advanced RP? Let me try to go advanced.

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/prince-lightning-pegasi-r397 Pegasi version of my regular OC.

I'm trying to underpower him some more aswell.

 

Is he ok?

[Tom The Diamond 1,830]

My first advanced RP? Let me try to go advanced.

http://mlpforums.com...ing-pegasi-r397 Pegasi version of my regular OC.

I'm trying to underpower him some more aswell.

 

Is he ok?

 

Erm, sorry, I'm gonna have to reject that one. While not being an Alicorn is a step in the right direction, relations with Mane characters from the show are really something best avoided with OCs. If they were allowed, just imagine how many boyfriends Fluttershy would have! : P

 

But yeah, being the son of Celestia, being friends with the Mane 6, and having Pinkie as a love interest, that's waaaay beyond the boundaries. Add that up with a relatively short and lackluster description and a few odd spelling mistake, and yeah, sorry, but I'll have to reject.

[Prince Lightning Da Cute 619]

 

 

Erm, sorry, I'm gonna have to reject that one. While not being an Alicorn is a step in the right direction, relations with Mane characters from the show are really something best avoided with OCs. If they were allowed, just imagine how many boyfriends Fluttershy would have! : P

 

But yeah, being the son of Celestia, being friends with the Mane 6, and having Pinkie as a love interest, that's waaaay beyond the boundaries. Add that up with a relatively short and lackluster description and a few odd spelling mistake, and yeah, sorry, but I'll have to reject.

 

Thanks for the constructive critism, I understand.

[Flow 1,629]

Okay, I'll join as the sixth pony then:

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/starry-sky-r89

Edited May 14, 2012 by Narutardedscum!!

[Tom The Diamond 1,830]

Okay, I'll join as the sixth pony then:

http://mlpforums.com.../starry-sky-r89

 

Alright, while your description is rather short, and a few odd grammar errors, I don't see any real major flaws, so Accepted!

 

And with that, sign-ups are now closed! I'll start the topic, along with my intro post. Basically, the RP pretty much begins with your character heading out into Murky Bayou, alone and searching for the swamp's center.

 

Of course, if you guys want, we can always wait for a seventh player, and make sure there'll be a heart for each player, instead of some intense fight to see who gets the seventh. Of course, I'll let you guys decide if you want to wait for a seventh player, it doesn't really matter to me.

 

And with that, I go!~

 

And the post is made! You ponies go ahead and make your intro posts, and get ready, cause the search for the seven hearts begins now!

[Aureity 3,055]

I'll make a post tomorrow when my brain is less tired, it's 1:30 AM and I can't think of anything long to type.

[Flow 1,629]

I hope my first post isn't too short

[Arylett Charnoa 4,919]

I hope you don't mind, Tom, but I went ahead and added an (OOC) to the title so that people don't get confused in their notifications. It doesn't show prefixes.

 

Also, you forgot to put a link to the OOC thread in the RP thread. There's a special form for it that people are somehow getting around, because it should be impossible to post without providing a link. in "Link to OOC Topic" Please provide your link. It's in the rules. And you should provide a link to the RP here as well.

Edited May 14, 2012 by Arylett Dawnsborough

[Tom The Diamond 1,830]

I hope you don't mind, Tom, but I went ahead and added an (OOC) to the title so that people don't get confused in their notifications. It doesn't show prefixes.

 

Also, you forgot to put a link to the OOC thread in the RP thread. There's a special form for it that people are somehow getting around, because it should be impossible to post without providing a link. in "Link to OOC Topic" Please provide your link. It's in the rules. And you should provide a link to the RP here as well.

Thanks for the title edit!

 

Though I did put the OOC topic in the thing during the thread creation thing (It doesn't let you create a topic without it), so I have no idea how it disappeared. Does it get deleted if you edit the top post? Oh well, its fixed now! And the link to the RP is on the front page of here now!

[NeverNeverland 1,940]

Just gonna ask - is general swearing allowed? Or do we have to restrain ourselves and watch what we say?

[Tom The Diamond 1,830]

Just gonna ask - is general swearing allowed? Or do we have to restrain ourselves and watch what we say?

 

Yeah, swear words are good to go here, as long as they're not used for anything too vulgar. Basically, if you couldn't say it on TV, then you probably can't say it here.

[SuperTheAwesome 199]

Sorry about the short post. I don't know that much about Murky Bayou yet, so I can't be too descriptive about it right now. My posts will grow longer in the future, trust me.

[Tom The Diamond 1,830]

Sorry about the short post. I don't know that much about Murky Bayou yet, so I can't be too descriptive about it right now. My posts will grow longer in the future, trust me.

Its fine, don't worry! Though there really isn't much to Murky Bayou, it's a swampy place with nearly no ground, filled with alligators, snakes, lizards, and giant spiders, millipedes and dragonflies. And normal sized bugs too. Did I mention the giant bugs in the first post? Probably not, but oh well, they're there. But oh well, their there. Not gigantic, but about 7 ft, like the ones that used to roam Earth thousands of years ago. Oh yeah, and the Kappas and Will-o'-the-Wisps (I like the Pokemon name of that better. The 'The' sounds so odd and long.)

 

Also Arylett, will you be making an intro post soon, or do you need a bit more time? Sorry if this sounds pushy or anything, It's just that I wanted to give everyone some time to make an intro post before actually going in further into the action, and leaving ponies behind, but I'd like to keep this RP slowly going, so it doesn't die out of inactivity. Again, sorry if this sounds pushy or anything.

Edited May 16, 2012 by Tom The Diamond

[Arylett Charnoa 4,919]

I'll be making my intro post fairly soon. I'm just feeling a bit under the weather lately.

[Flow 1,629]

I'll be making my intro post fairly soon. I'm just feeling a bit under the weather lately.

 

Damn you allergy season

[Tom The Diamond 1,830]

I'll be making my intro post fairly soon. I'm just feeling a bit under the weather lately.

 

It's OK, just make the post whenever you're ready~

Damn you allergy season

 

 

I've also done a bit of tweaking and fine tuning to the plot, so hopefully it'll be more interesting. One of the details I changed was that one thing in this RP was meant to be a sword/dagger/knife thing, but I changed it into something a bit more quirky and interesting. So yay! ^ . ^