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Part of me was expecting a fluffy, jovial poem since that's how I've always felt about winter... not quite as happy a poem as I expected :'D However, it's certainly more interesting than what I had in mind... I admire how much thought you put into this all, really wish I could have caught some more of the symbolism myself. Maybe I should spend a little more time checking poetry out, haha ^^; This was a lovely read, I'm curious now how your character turned out after a past so harsh :)


 

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7 hours ago, Blue cheese said:

Part of me was expecting a fluffy, jovial poem since that's how I've always felt about winter... not quite as happy a poem as I expected :'D However, it's certainly more interesting than what I had in mind... I admire how much thought you put into this all, really wish I could have caught some more of the symbolism myself. Maybe I should spend a little more time checking poetry out, haha ^^; This was a lovely read, I'm curious now how your character turned out after a past so harsh :)

Thank you! I hope to continue creating poetry in the future about my character's lives. Here's a hint: this is a hooved animal. According to Lauren Faust, albeit she no longer contributed to the show it is shown time and time again that all hooved animals are sentient. (Would the cows and sheep count as slavery or working beings? Also, Zecora exists.)  Because this character originally had not lived in lands inhabited by equids (ponies), she had faced challenges in her homeland, and had been inevitably forced to in her young life. 

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We all have dreams.

We never know if they're broken until they shatter.

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