Hierok 11,831 July 20, 2017 Share July 20, 2017 (edited) My OC has a broken horn, but I need a story for why it is broken. His name is Orchestral Bells and he is 26 year old. He composes music for orchestras and he plays percussion, cello, trombone and bass. He is serious, laughable and disciplined. When he was younger, and still studied on Celestia's school for high gifted unicorns: And his wife (Codal Forte): Edited July 23, 2017 by Hierok If I don't understand something or Interpret it wrong, I'm dutch. Sometimes I gamble for meanings of the words. And sometimes I write the wrong words, like week and weak for example. Sorry for it already. Discord, Twilight, Sunset, Fluttershy, Starlight, Rarity, Luna, Celestia, Big MCintosh, Cadence, Shining, Minuette, Lyra, Rara, Sweetie Belle, Cheerilee, Derpy, Spike. !Feel Free To Talk And Walk Where Ever You Like On This Forum! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mirage 24,766 July 20, 2017 Share July 20, 2017 I'm sorry - I'm not completely familiar with pony lore - is there anything significant about a broken horn? What happens as a result? Is it predictable? 1 “Remember that when you leave this earth, you can take with you nothing you have received--only what you have given.” Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cuteycindyhoney 13,307 July 21, 2017 Share July 21, 2017 (edited) In the upcoming movie there's a unicorn with a broken horn. Since she also lost his magic, I would say it's a very serious thing for ponies to lose their horn. Edited July 21, 2017 by cuteycindyhoney 1 Thank you Sparklefan1234!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hierok 11,831 July 21, 2017 Author Share July 21, 2017 7 hours ago, Mirage77 said: I'm sorry - I'm not completely familiar with pony lore - is there anything significant about a broken horn? What happens as a result? Is it predictable? They lose their magic in the proses. If I don't understand something or Interpret it wrong, I'm dutch. Sometimes I gamble for meanings of the words. And sometimes I write the wrong words, like week and weak for example. Sorry for it already. Discord, Twilight, Sunset, Fluttershy, Starlight, Rarity, Luna, Celestia, Big MCintosh, Cadence, Shining, Minuette, Lyra, Rara, Sweetie Belle, Cheerilee, Derpy, Spike. !Feel Free To Talk And Walk Where Ever You Like On This Forum! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mirage 24,766 July 21, 2017 Share July 21, 2017 They lose their magic? That's harsh man. I'd image a unicorn without magic becomes a sad being. So tragic. The question of why it was broken is definitely important because it will determine his underlying personality. Was it accidental or deliberate? Long ago or just recently? Perhaps try to find out what kind of behavior you are looking for - is he looking for vengeance? for restoration? doesn't care and lives with it? 1 “Remember that when you leave this earth, you can take with you nothing you have received--only what you have given.” Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hierok 11,831 July 21, 2017 Author Share July 21, 2017 (edited) 9 minutes ago, Mirage77 said: They lose their magic? That's harsh man. I'd image a unicorn without magic becomes a sad being. So tragic. The question of why it was broken is definitely important because it will determine his underlying personality. Was it accidental or deliberate? Long ago or just recently? Perhaps try to find out what kind of behavior you are looking for - is he looking for vengeance? for restoration? doesn't care and lives with it? I'm liking it more if it was an accident and it was when he was 18. He now is 26. He has no hard feelings for the person who did it. He became more serious and had a depression. I have been thinking about that another unicorn set a spell which went wrong and he lost his horn in the process. Edited July 21, 2017 by Hierok If I don't understand something or Interpret it wrong, I'm dutch. Sometimes I gamble for meanings of the words. And sometimes I write the wrong words, like week and weak for example. Sorry for it already. Discord, Twilight, Sunset, Fluttershy, Starlight, Rarity, Luna, Celestia, Big MCintosh, Cadence, Shining, Minuette, Lyra, Rara, Sweetie Belle, Cheerilee, Derpy, Spike. !Feel Free To Talk And Walk Where Ever You Like On This Forum! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mirage 24,766 July 21, 2017 Share July 21, 2017 That is a good start! A spell gone wrong is believable. Was there a lesson learned from this event? That is, anything that may define him in some way - ie, he hates magic now and doesn't trust it, seeks magic powerful enough to reverse his loss, is afraid of magic, etc. 1 “Remember that when you leave this earth, you can take with you nothing you have received--only what you have given.” Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techno Universal 2,575 July 21, 2017 Share July 21, 2017 Or maybe he lost his horn as a young filly like when he was a 3 year old when a major villain was attacking equestria. Like maybe his town was attacked by the Changling army and they attempted to take his love but he lost his horn when he defended himself from the changelings. 1 Message from UNIT: UBC-001 (Original image used made by @chaosprincess signature composed by @Kyoshi) My theory of MLP OC: Techno Universal ask me!: Link Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hierok 11,831 July 21, 2017 Author Share July 21, 2017 (edited) I writes sad and moving music since then. But he doesn't trust strong magic anymore. 6 minutes ago, Techno Universal said: Or maybe he lost his horn as a young filly like when he was a 3 year old when a major villain was attacking equestria. Like maybe his town was attacked by the Changling army and they attempted to take his love but he lost his horn when he defended himself from the changelings. Could be so. But I would prefer if he had lost his horn on a older age. Then it has real impact. But this can definitly be a scenario. Thank you! Edited July 21, 2017 by Hierok If I don't understand something or Interpret it wrong, I'm dutch. Sometimes I gamble for meanings of the words. And sometimes I write the wrong words, like week and weak for example. Sorry for it already. Discord, Twilight, Sunset, Fluttershy, Starlight, Rarity, Luna, Celestia, Big MCintosh, Cadence, Shining, Minuette, Lyra, Rara, Sweetie Belle, Cheerilee, Derpy, Spike. !Feel Free To Talk And Walk Where Ever You Like On This Forum! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techno Universal 2,575 July 21, 2017 Share July 21, 2017 (edited) 9 hours ago, Hierok said: I writes sad and moving music since then. But he doesn't trust strong magic anymore. Could be so. But I would prefer if he had lost his horn on a older age. Then it has real impact. But this can definitly be a scenario. Thank you! To be honest this scenario is modular with his age like the changing incident probably happened to him when he was 18 or close to it! Plus it can also add an element of craving revenge to his personality as he might want to someday get revenge against Queen Crysilas. Edited July 21, 2017 by Techno Universal 1 Message from UNIT: UBC-001 (Original image used made by @chaosprincess signature composed by @Kyoshi) My theory of MLP OC: Techno Universal ask me!: Link Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hierok 11,831 July 21, 2017 Author Share July 21, 2017 9 hours ago, Techno Universal said: To be honest this scenario is modular with his age like the changing incident probably happened to him when he was 18 or close to it! Plus it can also add an element of craving revenge to his personality as he might want to someday get revenge against Queen Crysias. Haven't thought of this. Thank you. If I don't understand something or Interpret it wrong, I'm dutch. Sometimes I gamble for meanings of the words. And sometimes I write the wrong words, like week and weak for example. Sorry for it already. Discord, Twilight, Sunset, Fluttershy, Starlight, Rarity, Luna, Celestia, Big MCintosh, Cadence, Shining, Minuette, Lyra, Rara, Sweetie Belle, Cheerilee, Derpy, Spike. !Feel Free To Talk And Walk Where Ever You Like On This Forum! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techno Universal 2,575 July 21, 2017 Share July 21, 2017 Just now, Hierok said: Haven't thought of this. Thank you. No problem mate!!! Because I'm Australian! 1 Message from UNIT: UBC-001 (Original image used made by @chaosprincess signature composed by @Kyoshi) My theory of MLP OC: Techno Universal ask me!: Link Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hierok 11,831 July 23, 2017 Author Share July 23, 2017 (edited) I think I've got it. He was a very talented unicorn. Almost as good as Starlight and Twilight. But when he tried to do a complex spell when he was 19 years old he made a fault, which caused an explosion. He was heavily wounded. The top his horn was gone, so he couldn't use magic anymore. He became depressed for a couple years, till Celestia found him again and encouraged him to do music, since he was always fascinated by it. This helped him overcome is lose, but he never became his past self. He is serious, but back in the days he was always in for a laugh. Edited July 23, 2017 by Hierok If I don't understand something or Interpret it wrong, I'm dutch. Sometimes I gamble for meanings of the words. And sometimes I write the wrong words, like week and weak for example. Sorry for it already. Discord, Twilight, Sunset, Fluttershy, Starlight, Rarity, Luna, Celestia, Big MCintosh, Cadence, Shining, Minuette, Lyra, Rara, Sweetie Belle, Cheerilee, Derpy, Spike. !Feel Free To Talk And Walk Where Ever You Like On This Forum! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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