open Alicorn's Ailment (Retry)

[Sparklefan1234 170,624]

(1. I've always wanted to see an "evil" Twilight Sparkle which, is why I did what I did.

2. Loyal  has lost his closest ally.)

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[Loyal Defender 4,111]

Chapter Seven – It Bugs Me No Longer

 

Back in Canterlot, Gallant Knight was busy with his training, when a letter poofed up before him. The same thing went to his mother, wherever SHE was.

 

‘To Mom/Dad,

 

I want you thank you both for caring for me ever since I was a foal. All those good old times of family trips, having fun, with me being the savior during our playtime. Heh, kids grow up fast, don’t they? I remember vividly when I got my Cutie Mark in protecting ponies….but now...it doesn’t seem like that’s my talent anymore. All I’ve ever gotten from everypony is negative comments, telling me that I’m a lost cause, that I….I’m transient. So, with that, I’ve decided something. I’m no longer Loyal Defender...or the child you once knew. I am now somepony different...somepony who has to face facts – I’m just a royal offender. So with this letter, it saddens me that I must burden you both goodbye...it was all fun while it lasted...ironic that first time you left me….now it’s the opposite. Life’s just funny like that I guess. Even still, if you never hear from me again, just know I’m proud of you both for raising me well.

 

Signed,

 

U (hoofprint)’

 

[Sparklefan1234 170,624]

(Did I make a mistake? Did I ruin this story because now he has nopony to call his friend?)

(Also, if your title is a reference to the Changelings that's very clever.)

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[Loyal Defender 4,111]

(You made no mistake. This plan involved Loyal being kidnapped. That's exactly what he's gonna do. Also thanks :3)

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[Sparklefan1234 170,624]

(That's good & You're Welcome, My Friend.)

 

*Meanwhile, at the Castle of Friendship*

 

Y'know something, Spike?

 

What? 

 

Telling Loyal Defender how I really felt was a huge weight being lifted off of my shoulders.

 

Sure he thinks I'm evil now, but I had to act that way in order to get my point across.

 

Yeah, I *totally* get it. 

 

I mean, I didn't want to make friends with Loyal in the first place, but I felt obligated due to my role as the Princess of Friendship. 

 

I hear ya. 

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Edited March 26, 2018 by Sparklefan1234

[Loyal Defender 4,111]

(With risky actions comes active risks)

 

At this point, I’d had enough. With tears and wind stinging my eyes, I flew out and into the Everfree Forest, landing in a random spot, and took a deep breath. This was it. This was my only hope now. I had to let myself be kidnapped. It was the only way to be any form of happy...even if I had to let Changelings extract Layol from me. Even if it ended with me becoming a slave to their leader for maliciious reasons.

I then shouted at the top of my lungs. “HEY! BUG FREAKS! JUST TAKE ME IN! YOU HEAR ME?! JUST MAKE ALL OF THIS HELL STOP! COME AND GET ME!”

I shot all kinds of beams in many directions (just not up. I didn’t want anypony to find me) to give off my location. Tears streamed down more the longer this went on before I finally collapsed from exhaustion and sorrow. I didn’t want to open my eyes. I just didn’t. I at least hoped if a Changeling did find me….one of them would be a ‘nice’ Changeling who would be my friend..they’d at least be better than the ones I had. I waited and waited, until I heard hoofsteps. I didn’t dare look up or open my eyes.

 

“Just take me...I can’t stand this any longer….I just want this all to stop…all this torment… *voice breaking* All this torture… I don’t care what happens to me, I just want my happy life back...I just want all this pain gone...please…..everypony hates me...nopony trusts me...I trust no one anymore...”

From this point of view, no matter how evil the creature, they all agreed on one thing – as much as they had to go on with a plan, this was a very heartbreaking scene, even for creatures without emotion. It wouldn’t change a thing about their plan, but they likely would feel sorry for how much pain I seemed to be in.

 

Of course if it wasn't Changelings at least this could be me imagining HOW they'd 'feel'.

[Sparklefan1234 170,624]

*Twilight, Spike, Big Mac & Applejack play the pony equivalent of "Hungry, Hungry, Hippos" called "Greedy, Greedy, Hippogriffs"*

 

Edited March 26, 2018 by Sparklefan1234

[Loyal Defender 4,111]

I sat there, waiting. “I’m not looking at you. Looking a pony in the tear-stained eyes is more hurtful than seeing one cry. Just….tell me what you are. Speak, roar, something...at least I know I’m not alone now….and that SOMEONE will take me.."

 

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[Sparklefan1234 170,624]

*Suddenly, a Changeling appears & captures, Loyal Defender*

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[Loyal Defender 4,111]

I felt something green and sticky and/or slimy grow over me, covering my nose, mouth, eyes and ears, and body. I blacked out shortly after, mostly from the exhaustion of using so much magic

 

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[Sparklefan1234 170,624]

*Loyal Defender is brought to a Changeling Hive & is dropped at the hooves of Queen Chrysallis*

 

Good work, Chuckie. 

At last we meet again for the first time for the last time, Loyal Defender. 

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Edited March 26, 2018 by Sparklefan1234

[Loyal Defender 4,111]

*The moment is ruined due to Changeling magic colliding with exhaustion causing his blackout to be longer than expected.*

 

*crickets chirp, revealing to be a Changeling adding to the drama.*

“Eheh...sorry...”

(had to xD)

 

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[Sparklefan1234 170,624]

*Facehoofs & sighs*

Chandler...What did I tell you about interrupting me when I'm being menacing?! 

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[Loyal Defender 4,111]

“Uhm…..isn’t it only menacing when they’re paying attention?” Another Changeling, by the name of Jerus asked, nudging the Alicorn.

 

 

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[Sparklefan1234 170,624]

*Sighs heavily*

 

I'm surrounded by idiots.

 

*Blasts Loyal with magic*

Edited March 26, 2018 by Sparklefan1234

[Loyal Defender 4,111]

“Urgh...damn it...that’s the last time I shout at the top of my lungs, use magic, and not expect something unexpec--*GAAAAH!*” Seeing the giant bug queen in front of me, I shot a beam out of impulse at the ceiling, only for its magic to….flow into a nearby throne.

(irony :D)

 

(I so wanna put a broken echo trope in. Like, ‘Welcome to my evil lair!….lair!….lair!….PIANOS….lair!’)

 

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[Sparklefan1234 170,624]

 

Charllote!

Destroy the Alicorn! (All of my Changelings have "ch" names. )

 

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[Loyal Defender 4,111]

“Uh...first off, that was an impulse blast..second, we needed him, remember? To extract his negative energy?”

 

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[Sparklefan1234 170,624]

 *Extracts negative energy from Loyal*

 

There, happy!? 

 

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[Loyal Defender 4,111]

(Nuuuuu it doesn't work like that XD)

 

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Edited March 26, 2018 by Loyal Defender

[Sparklefan1234 170,624]

I ate all of your Nightmare Night candy & destroyed your Hearths Warming gifts. How does that make you feel, Alicorn? 

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Edited March 26, 2018 by Sparklefan1234

[Loyal Defender 4,111]

“Gifts are one thing….family love’s another.”

 

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[Sparklefan1234 170,624]

*Something related to Loyal's family that sends him into a rage*

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[Loyal Defender 4,111]

“My family loves me. They never lied, they never cheated...not like my…..friends….they….they all lieed to me….betrayed me….acted like I was….nothing...” No...it was happening...I could feel it...

 

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[Sparklefan1234 170,624]

*Layol releases himself from his weak Alicorn vessel*

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