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Cider Contest 3.0: Special Zecora Edition


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  On 2018-06-22 at 5:11 PM, lordvaltasar said:

Our brightest artist,Rarity meet
who paints with threads ribbons and silks
and all ponies her work seek
thats why she oppened three boutiques

Rarity 22
 

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  On 2018-06-22 at 5:50 PM, lordvaltasar said:

like a swan,white and elegant
with a dark amethyst mane

and as for what marks her flank
three cerulean diamonds there

Rarity 23

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  On 2018-06-22 at 6:21 PM, lordvaltasar said:

Narcisist some call her and,well..
she loves to take care of her image
but to know your worth and self
is great and never be discouraged

Rarity 24

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I’m sorry, but I don’t think any of these rhyme. 

Rarity is still at 22. 

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  On 2018-06-23 at 12:40 AM, lordvaltasar said:

the first one toraly rhymes,i'm actually quite proud on how that one turned out but your post your rules no biggie

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Fair enough. Seek would rhyme with boutique, if you didn't write boutique in plural form. But other than that, you're right. I won't use such a technicality against you.

Rarity is at 23 


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  On 2018-06-24 at 4:18 AM, ChB said:

Fair enough. Seek would rhyme with boutique, if you didn't write boutique in plural form. But other than that, you're right. I won't use such a technicality against you.

Rarity is at 23 

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boutiques is paired with silks thats why its in plural,while meet is paired with seek,i don't argue for the points don't feel obligated to give them i was just defending my poem

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I believe that the rules state,

That the second and fourth lines are the ones to rhyme.

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Although with a brohoof it looks okay this time.

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Applejack swigs back number eighty eight.

Aj=88

 

 

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Zecora speaks like that for the most part
that was the idea,its not a court
surely that rule is there to help you start
and not to cut our options short
believe me i'm not trying to be smart
like applejack i'm honest i report
these here rules i surely take to heart
if trully it bothers you i won't retort
i will accept it,i'm just here for the art
and the points again i will abort

Applejack: 89

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If the rules don't match how Zecora speaks,

Then that's a matter for the games creator.

Applejack wonders if the rules need tweaks,

As she'd rather be a drinker than a hater.

Aj = 90

 

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O Rarity!  Your delicate tum
couldn't hold the booze and made you chum.
'Tis quite all right, for now, you see,
You can start drinking again quite easily.

Rarity 26

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Yeech... why was I mentioned? some of the rules are so complicated.

So we must write... either in a couplet, or a quatrain with ABAB rhyme? Each valid post adds +1 cider to the character's drink count?

I feel like a word number per verse is a bit superfluous, too. But okay, I'll see what I can come up with.


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  On 2018-07-15 at 2:17 PM, Feather Spiral said:

So we must write... either in a couplet, or a quatrain with ABAB rhyme? 

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The ABAB doesn't seem to be followed that hard, I've tended to be XBYB, just making the 2nd & 4th rhyme as per the rulesets

 

 

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  On 2018-07-16 at 4:52 PM, Dawnchaser said:

The ABAB doesn't seem to be followed that hard, I've tended to be XBYB, just making the 2nd & 4th rhyme as per the rulesets

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Yes. XBYB is all that’s required, as that’s the way Zecora rhymed.

That said, ABAB and AABB are also acceptable.


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I mean, at this point... we're all done, AJ pretty much wins.

She's at 90 drinks thanks to Dawnchaser being really bored, followed by Rarity at an impressive 26 from Valtasar's votes.

Then we got: Twi at 4, Pinkie at 3, Rainbow and Fluttershy at 1.

Lyra and Starlight don't even exist after the original post, apparently. :yeahno:


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