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[Neoeryn 196]

Since I had my phone for the weekend, I had access to art apps! So I used that to work on some concepts for villains for my AU! Here they are!

First off, there's King Lavan.
He is the ruler of the Inferno, a land beyond Equestria, in which lives all sorts of fiery creatures and flora. His goal is to take over every corner of the world, in hopes of fixing his broken kingdom. He ends up rethinking that goal later on, after realizing how much him and Princess Celestia are alike, and that he even has unrequited feelings for her.

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Secondly, there's Catrina, the all-powerful witch. She was the mentor of Star Swirl, and her amulet held great power. Power even stronger than him.
Her amulet had ended up being taken from her by Discord, who had began his reign with it. Eventually, he was defeated, and Star Swirl had found the amulet, and gave it to Scorpan after he proved to be the strongest and truest ally to ponykind. She's no longer around, just some history figure Twilight has tried to find information on, but to no avail.

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Lastly, Erebus, the weather demon. Much like Calamity, they were both created from the imbalance in Equestria, and can both control the weather and natural disasters.
He's not exactly a villain, but he's not exactly a protagonist either. Erebus relies on nobody except himself, and never takes orders from anyone. He usually goes with the flow, following instincts instead of his heart and mind. He doesn't have a goal, other than trying to find somewhere to fit in among others. He ends up reuniting with Calamity, and end up becoming friends trying to fit in somewhere together.

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Edited March 23, 2021 by Neoeryn
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[Neoeryn 196]

I do want to say, once I do get my phone back for sure, I will start working on the comic, and posting it to DeviantArt!

This thread rn though is where I'll post all my concepts and designs, sorta like a sneak peek thing. I will post more once I get access to art stuff again!

[ExplosionMare 18,062]

Aaa all these look so cute and cool, especially Catrina!

[Neoeryn 196]

10 hours ago, ExplosionMare said:

Aaa all these look so cute and cool, especially Catrina!

Thank you so much! Her design was mostly a concept, but I do have an actual design in mind for her!

[ExplosionMare 18,062]

22 hours ago, Neoeryn said:

Thank you so much! Her design was mostly a concept, but I do have an actual design in mind for her!

You’re welcome 

Ooh, can’t wait to see the final product!

[Neoeryn 196]

Update for a pony design!

Tirek. Known to want power, destruction, and nothing more than taking over Equestria. He and Calamity were rivals, until he was thrown into Tartarus and she was hit with the power of the Elements. Almost everything that happened in the show is the same, except.. he’s escaped his stone prison a few years after the rest of the Mane 6 passed on, and Twilight was still in power. After finding out about how much power Calamity had, and that she played a role in Lavan’s defeat and redemption, he wanted all her magic for himself. So, he devised a plan to disguise himself, gain the trust of Calamity and Discord, and to steal her magic from her after luring her to the Everfree Forest. It took a long while, but he failed and had eventually succumbed to friendship, with the help of Calamity and the hope she had that he truly was capable of changing for the better.

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Crackship version:

Everything is the same, but due to my friends seriously wanting Tirek x Calamity, I suppose I may as well add this here oop-

Tirek gradually starts trusting her and wanting to keep her safe while in his obvious little disguise. Why, you may ask? Well, he may attempt to be scary and intimidating, but it’s just for show, and deep down, he truly does fear he isn’t doing the right thing. An attempt to make everyone else fear him, and so after realizing how much Calamity actually believes in him, it makes him realize some things. He’s not the ‘Lord’ he’s always wanted to be, only trying to appear bigger than everyone else because of his father and the restricted freedoms he had growing up. Friendship wasn’t all so bad, and while no pony may really trust him, he is trying to change for the better, because Calamity is the only one he knows who trusts and cares about him and his well-being.

Let’s see how this goes!