offering critique Silky's Beauty Spa (OC creation and re-designing)

[ThePinkestofPones 6,361]

"Why thank you Shiny! Been really ingrained in the doodle world recently" says Saturn, with a smile 

[Shiny Silvermoon 4,390]

11 minutes ago, ThatPinkPone said:

"Why thank you Shiny! Been really ingrained in the doodle world recently" says Saturn, with a smile 

"That's awesome! No matter what it means!" 

[ThePinkestofPones 6,361]

"Glad you like them!" Saturn says, giggling 

[Iridescent Edge 592]

*I peak my head through the door.* “Um, hi. Is anyone going to notice me here?”

[Ice Princess Silky <3 19,239]

( Hi there! I do not get notifications since my notifications BLOW up, already and I do apologize for that. )

Silky seems absent from the store despite the fact that the door was open for him to peek his head through. Despite that, there was a chair in front of a mirror that looked rather inviting to sit on.

[Saturn Ring (Remake)]

"HELLO!" shouted a voice, if Iridescent should look to his left he should see a bright pink unicorn, with a magenta, cyan and white mane and tail, she wore a light blue hoodie and a pair of headphones, she also had white markings on her legs, her cutie mark was the planet saturn colored blue with 3 stars under it.

[Iridescent Edge 592]

*I look to my left at the cyan, white, and magenta mare.* “Hi. Who’re you?” *I take a few steps into the building.*

[ThePinkestofPones 6,361]

1 minute ago, IridescentEdge said:

*I look to my left at the cyan, white, and magenta mare.* “Hi. Who’re you?” *I take a few steps into the building.*

"I'm one of Silky's friends, I come here sometimes, check on the place, I'm Saturn, and you are?" She said

[Iridescent Edge 592]

“My name’s Iridescent Edge, but my friends just call me Iri.”

[Saturn Ring (Remake)]

1 minute ago, IridescentEdge said:

“My name’s Iridescent Edge, but my friends just call me Iri.”

"Nice to meet you, what brings you here?" She asked. 

[Iridescent Edge 592]

“Uh, curiosity? Boredom? Sometimes I just like to wander aimlessly and explore.”

[ThePinkestofPones 6,361]

12 minutes ago, IridescentEdge said:

“Uh, curiosity? Boredom? Sometimes I just like to wander aimlessly and explore.”

"Ah, a casual adventurer, like myself! What intrigued you about this place particularly if I may ask?"

[Iridescent Edge 592]

"I don't know, I just saw it and thought, 'why not?'"

[Ice Princess Silky <3 19,239]

3 hours ago, IridescentEdge said:

"I don't know, I just saw it and thought, 'why not?'"

Suddenly, a pony would appear out of nowhere and smile "Ah! Velcom, Velcom!" it looked like a pony with blond hair from GerMANEy. 

"Have a seat my good gentlecolt! How may I help you?!"

There were so many beauty potions and magazines laying around. It was pretty clear the pony was suggesting some kind of new style for @IridescentEdge 
"Tell me! What is your name? What style would you like for your hair?"

(Please add some images or references if you would like a quick sketch of your character in some new design)

[Saturn Ring (Remake)]

"Ay, Silk, I got a friend who needs your help too," Saturn smiled, leading a clearly robotic pony into the room, "this is Violette Storm, anything you could do for her?"

[Iridescent Edge 592]

19 minutes ago, Ice Princess Silky <3 said:

Suddenly, a pony would appear out of nowhere and smile "Ah! Velcom, Velcom!" it looked like a pony with blond hair from GerMANEy. 

"Have a seat my good gentlecolt! How may I help you?!"

There were so many beauty potions and magazines laying around. It was pretty clear the pony was suggesting some kind of new style for @IridescentEdge 
"Tell me! What is your name? What style would you like for your hair?"

(Please add some images or references if you would like a quick sketch of your character in some new design)

*I lie down on the seat.* "Uh, I like my mane the way it is. What do you think? Is it too flashy? Too 'Mary Sue?'"

Iridescent_Edge.update.psd

Edited June 6 by IridescentEdge
Adding image because I was requested to.

[Ice Princess Silky <3 19,239]

Moments ago, IridescentEdge said:

*I lie down on the seat.* "Uh, I like my mane the way it is. What do you think? Is it too flashy? Too 'Mary Sue?'"

The blond pony, who was just called Silky by @ThePinkestofPones for some reason, simply smiled as she checked the pony's hair* Not at all! It looks fabulous. But if you would like we can give it a nice spa wash and add some shine.

12 minutes ago, Saturn Ring (Remake) said:

"Ay, Silk, I got a friend who needs your help too," Saturn smiled, leading a clearly robotic pony into the room, "this is Violette Storm, anything you could do for her?"

*she smiles* Thank you for calling me Silky. You must be talking about my hair. But my name is Marta c:

How may I help your friend?

 

[Saturn Ring (Remake)]

15 hours ago, Ice Princess Silky &lt;3 said:

The blond pony, who was just called Silky by @ThePinkestofPones for some reason, simply smiled as she checked the pony's hair* Not at all! It looks fabulous. But if you would like we can give it a nice spa wash and add some shine.

*she smiles* Thank you for calling me Silky. You must be talking about my hair. But my name is Marta c:

How may I help your friend?

 

She said "OOP, must be a new employee then," and then looked to Violette, "she just needs a model update, I think she looks too much like me," 

[Shiny Silvermoon 4,390]

*Suddenly wakes up on a nearby chair at the beauty spa.* "Wha- What's going on? Where am I? Does anypony needs a name for their OC? That's one of my special talents! That and being able to throw croissants and they come back to me like boomerangs!"

[Ice Princess Silky <3 19,239]

8 hours ago, Saturn Ring (Remake) said:

She said "OOP, must be a new employee then," and then looked to Violette, "she just needs a model update, I think she looks too much like me," 

A new hairstyle you say? What about a cute little pony tail? 

[Snoopy Fan 9,004]

6 minutes ago, Ice Princess Silky &lt;3 said:

A new hairstyle you say? What about a cute little pony tail? 

Aww, cute. I like it.

[ThePinkestofPones 6,361]

20 minutes ago, Ice Princess Silky &lt;3 said:

A new hairstyle you say? What about a cute little pony tail? 

Something more long

[rottenpawzies 176]

Could u redesign my oc StormGlow??For info of her backstory and personlity:She's a runaway from the village of Prismida,a secluded area of Equestria;an unicorn village where magic is connected to emotion,she got kicked out after they thought she's the 'rainboe demon' when the magic of the sacred rainbow gem  swept into her and they thought she "stole the magic".She's a fierce,independent mare,but she has trust issues..I kinda feel like her design looks somewhat..bland?

Moments ago, rottenpawzies said:

Could u redesign my oc StormGlow??For info of her backstory and personlity:She's a runaway from the village of Prismida,a secluded area of Equestria;an unicorn village where magic is connected to emotion,she got kicked out after they thought she's the 'rainboe demon' when the magic of the sacred rainbow gem  swept into her and they thought she "stole the magic".She's a fierce,independent mare,but she has trust issues..I kinda feel like her design looks somewhat..bland?

also i forgot but,her cutie mark is very important to the lore,so please don't change jt

[Ice Princess Silky <3 19,239]

On 2025-08-11 at 6:34 AM, rottenpawzies said:

Could u redesign my oc StormGlow??For info of her backstory and personlity:She's a runaway from the village of Prismida,a secluded area of Equestria;an unicorn village where magic is connected to emotion,she got kicked out after they thought she's the 'rainboe demon' when the magic of the sacred rainbow gem  swept into her and they thought she "stole the magic".She's a fierce,independent mare,but she has trust issues..I kinda feel like her design looks somewhat..bland?

O my gosh -- she's precious! I am SO sorry for missing this, lovely. I may have to close this thread since I feel so bad being unable to keep up with everyone. Perhaps another artist can chime in to help out? I will do what I can but I have to go on vacation soon. Please don't think I am ignoring this. I just noticed it. (Too many notifications make me miss stuff). 

I love her colors, though, she looks so fun to draw!