offering critique Silky's Beauty Spa (OC creation and re-designing)

[Sparkliersparks 127]

10 minutes ago, Shiny Silvermoon said:

"If you are wondering where Silky is, fear not! She is a very busy pegasus and has a lot of ponies to take care of! She will come back to you as soon as she can! However, I can't really help you as, unlike unicorn magic, I have zero knowledge in potions! You can always put some clothes on so we can see you! Like I said, Silky will come back to you as soon as possible!" Shiny Silvermoon responded.

"Yeah Alright, I guess she is a princess..."
I walk over to where I left my saddle bag and retrieve my writing implements
I take my quill and inkwell, along with a piece of parchment and some blotting paper
I dip my quill in the ink and scribble a little until it runs out, then I go for another dip
I scribble some more having to dip my quill four more times until I was done 
After I'm done I dry the excess ink using some of my blotting paper
Once done, I pack everything up and slip my saddle bag back on
A floating saddle bag walks over to the pretty looking robot
It gives her the piece of parchment and says

"Here's my email and phone number, let me know when Silky's back!"

A floating saddle bag runs out of the establishment, with nefarious intentions

"I'm gonna go boop as many ponies as possible before I get arrested!"
"Time to put this invisibility to good use!"

It runs away into the distance at the exact maximum running speed of the average royal guard
Looking for unprotecting pony muzzles to boop...