Scarfy HOOVES 310 July 4, 2012 Share July 4, 2012 naturally i chose applebloom. this was a first attempt i aware that it looks funny that's why i need your guys tips. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BuggleLugs 53 July 4, 2012 Share July 4, 2012 Thats pretty good for a first attempt! the only thing i can really pick at is how chubby she is... but its kinda adorable Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tdroid 234 July 4, 2012 Share July 4, 2012 I agree with BuggieLugs it is a good start. As for tips I have this: Keep drawing and preferably do it from reference until you know by habit how to draw a pony/filly, and make sure to draw different poses. 1 I like to do requests. Please, if there is something you want to see me, an amateur, draw for you, just send me a PM with the details and I'll say yay or nay. Most likely yay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SrFrog 927 July 4, 2012 Share July 4, 2012 For a first attempt it's not bad, body proportion and muzzle size need a bit of work is all. You got the gist of it though. "Never give no manipulative bitch the benefit of the doubt" - Compa's grandpa... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hazardus_Havard. 479 July 4, 2012 Share July 4, 2012 Constructive Criticism on your drawing - When drawing, you should really lightly draw on any paper, forming spots where you want to place your figures parts such as the head or torso. I can see you hard lined and tried to erase near the hoofs and eyes. After you have the areas you like as you see fit should you hard line to produce details in full force. The eyes are the most expressed part in the drawings for the ponies; they tend to be somewhat oval near the temples or rounded out more as they appear younger. Don't forget the white's in the eyes. The hair on top is somewhat flat, try putting some bounce into it and round it outwards from the head a bit. Finally, try getting a sketchbook to contain any drawings you do in the future. You can see how you progress and make improvements and store some of the images you really like. You may also later on want to take some of those pieces you like to digitally clean them for whatever use they appeal to you. As a tip, don't be afraid to use references from the show or even from other sources to create your own variations of ponies for a unique style to you. And only with continued practice and patience will you truly get better. Practice makes perfect; but if nobody's perfect, why practice? http://hazardus-havard.deviantart.com/ Art http://www.fimfiction.net/story/70801/an-alien-walks-amongst-us Story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zweiterversuch 50 July 4, 2012 Share July 4, 2012 Mmm....I'm not very good at drawing ponies, but I think the ponies in my little pony have a bigger head (specially the children) and a thinner body. Also their eyes tend to be more like: (diagonal) and not so - (horizontal). Also add some "shine" to her eyes. It would make her look more "alive". And add some color. Then it will stop being good to start being great! Spike and rarity?Deerpy hooves and dr whooves?Discord and Celestia? Fridge yeah! Go here to read my fanfic: http://mlpforums.com/topic/23346-windgale-last-subordinate-of-discord-i-changed-the-name/ If you want to see the art I made for it: http://mlpforums.com/topic/23426-art-for-my-fanfic/ Go here if you want to see my MLP related art: http://mlpforums.com/topic/23012-fan-artkindameh/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scarfy HOOVES 310 July 5, 2012 Author Share July 5, 2012 yeah im a horrible artist but i really want to be good at it. anyone have any good guides they could link me to that might help me improve with this particular art style? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love4discord18 269 July 5, 2012 Share July 5, 2012 That's good for your first drawing^^ What I did to get better is I stared down refs and tried to copy there style. Then as I got better I slowly developed my own style. Y'know, experimented. ~If You Want Me To Reply To Your Post, Quote My Post~ ( Siggy by me. If you would like a signature, please message me ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr.RedundantPh.D 60 July 5, 2012 Share July 5, 2012 I really like the drawing style, and except for the body being a bit too chubby, it's very good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silverwisp the Bard 2,353 July 5, 2012 Share July 5, 2012 (edited) http://haute-claire....chart-290008324 Here ya go. It's the best proportion study on fillies I've found so far. Just keep drawing and you'll improve. You might also find this helpful for grown up ponies (taught me everything I know) Edited July 5, 2012 by Silverwisp the Bard My Art Thread, updated (almost) daily Tomorrow will take us away, far from home No one will ever know our names But the bard songs will remain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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