request Very easy request!

[VladmireV.S.(Crank) 1,096]

i just wanted to ask anypony to draw my OC with a black hoodie. i have seen it before, and i thought it would fit him........here he is if yer up for it:

[Shankveld 4,951]

Can you provide me with the reference picture that you've seen before? ~

[ScottishUnicorn 285]

Here is some critique on the drawing:

The upper front leg is too straight. The back leg is awkwardly placed. The pony has no neck. The chest and belly are not connecting unless it has some sort of weird growth. there needs to be more hair, there is not enough volume. The tail is well placed. The ear and eyes are pretty solid. You need to focus more on the structure of the pony.

Edited July 18, 2012 by ScottishUnicorn

[VladmireV.S.(Crank) 1,096]

Here is some critique on the drawing:The upper front leg is too straight. The back leg is awkwardly placed. The pony has no neck. The chest and belly are not connecting unless it has some sort of weird growth. there needs to be more hair, there is not enough volume. The tail is well placed. The ear and eyes are pretty solid. You need to focus more on the structure of the pony.

mhmmm.... how about this drawing?:

 

Can you provide me with the reference picture that you've seen before? ~

 

Edited July 19, 2012 by OC library(Sir Prise)