writing Try and fail

[Inkfeather 597]

Another poem, inpired by my current mood.

 

 

This heart of mine.

A dissapointed one.

Drown my sorrow in wine.

To tired to run.

 

I flee from the sad.

Always cought in the end.

Life isn't so bad.

When you share with a friend.

 

Where may she be.

When I need her the most.

My heart must be free.

So to romance I toast.

 

Fill up my heart.

With the love that I need.

In my mind you take part.

And my soul you read.

 

Tell what you feel.

I will listen my dear.

Show me, it's real.

You have nothing to fear.

 

I try and I fail.

To find what I seek.

In the end of my tale.

I am soulless and weak

 

 

Feel free to comment and give criticism.

[pondus30 152]

What do you seek?

Im not sure

You have been searching for a week...

 

Lol that rimed, i failed at writing a poem

 

 

your poem was good tho!

Edited December 30, 2011 by pondus30

[Inkfeather 597]

What do you seek?

Im not sure

 

your poem was good tho!

 

I thank you very much for the nice comment. Poetry is really what I would call my special talent if I have any. It's the only thing I feel that I'm actually good at.

 

To answer your question.

 

What I seek is to be accepted by a person of the opposite sex. I seek someone that I can share my heart and life with. Someone that I can love for all eternity.

I seek my chosen one. My destined partner.

[pondus30 152]

I thank you very much for the nice comment. Poetry is really what I would call my special talent if I have any. It's the only thing I feel that I'm actually good at.

 

To answer your question.

 

What I seek is to be accepted by a person of the opposite sex. I seek someone that I can share my heart and life with. Someone that I can love for all eternity.

I seek my chosen one. My destined partner.

 

Only time will show