ooc Equestria Divided (Grimdark)

[Spell Shock 56]

Manehatten Undercity, Tavern. She waits for Eternity to resque Star or to resque them if they all fail. For crying out loud, let's hope that wont come to that.

[GreyScholar 1,584]

I have a question...can I add another character ? I have two characters and I would love to use one of them in House Whitegold.

If not, its no problem.

How many ponies are already in House Whitegold?

 

Manehatten Undercity, Tavern. She waits for Eternity to resque Star or to resque them if they all fail. For crying out loud, let's hope that wont come to that.

Got it, we can perhaps figure out where they will meet.

[Miss Light Diamond 2,803]

How many ponies are already in House Whitegold?

 

Got it, we can perhaps figure out where they will meet.

 

There are five...is that too many ?

I have a character who is half pegasus half zebra...who's special talent is music and stuff. Like Glaceons OC Evergreen, she would have changed allot because of the war. Anyway, she would make a perfect Siren.

[MagicalStarRain 599]

@,

 

Oh, sounds nice!  Can't wait to see him or her!

 

@@EquestrianScholar, 

 

Five people are in House Whitegold, not including myself.

[GreyScholar 1,584]

There are five...is that too many ?

I have a character who is half pegasus half zebra...who's special talent is music and stuff. Like Glaceons OC Evergreen, she would have changed allot because of the war. Anyway, she would make a perfect Siren.

Okay just remember as she is half zebra the mare wont be as good or as strong of a flier as a pure pegasus, other then that it sounds like you have a good idea going. Take it up with the moderator and make a bio for approval.

Edited April 4, 2013 by EquestrianScholar

[Miss Light Diamond 2,803]

Okay just remember as she is half zebra the mare wont be as good or as strong of a flier as a pure pegasus, other then that it sounds like you have a good idea going. Take it up with the moderator and make a bio for approval.

She know's how to fly but is by no means an expert.

I shall send Star a PM right. I also gotta make her backstory a little longer.

But if you want to look her over for some reason than here she is...

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/star-song-r1880

Keep in mind that her back story has not been edited.

[Spell Shock 56]

Spell would be probably drinking plain water in the tavern along with Lightning. She used a lot of magic just now, just in case of one thing, so she is dehydradated. 

[Archi the Atmomancer 564]

Where is Spell at the moment? Also on our idea of a journey, in addition to perhaps those already with your filly I do believe Golden Dawn would be helpful on getting to the Dragon Lands.

 

Nightfall

The Dancer will likely not be happy to finding out that the Storyteller can't form lasting relationships, and that how it can be argued that he is just as attracted to her as he is to the Composer and other mares he has met. That it the one major disadvantage to playing a flank chaser and charmer even if the character doesn't purposefully mean to hurt another and is actually very nice is that he plays with a females emotions and feelings...

 

Oh God, flank chaser. That made me chuckle.

 

Things will not end well for the Storyteller if he gets stuck in a 2-on-1 beatdown facing a heart-broken/vengeful Dancer and Composer, so watch your step. 

[GreyScholar 1,584]

She know's how to fly but is by no means an expert.

I shall send Star a PM right. I also gotta make her backstory a little longer.

But if you want to look her over for some reason than here she is...

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/star-song-r1880

Keep in mind that her back story has not been edited.

Noted that you haven't edited it, though yes you will need to expand her bio, you have read my thread on making a good backstory right?

Also I would suggesting editing her personality, expand her few negatives like her uncertainty on her appearance and shyness... though arguably I feel too many people use shyness and being uncertain about themselves when it comes to making mares (guilty when it comes to Stardream), perhaps we are channeling Fluttershy a bit.

 

Spell would be probably drinking plain water in the tavern along with Lightning. She used a lot of magic just now, just in case of one thing, so she is dehydradated. 

Laughs, wow this brings me back to how your filly first met Golden Dawn in my Dark Equestria campaign. Both times it was in a tavern and I believe both Spell and Lightening were there... can't remember if I let you use Lightening.

 

Oh God, flank chaser.  That made me chuckle.

 

Things will not end well for the Storyteller if he gets stuck in a 2-on-1 beatdown facing a heart-broken/vengeful Dancer and Composer, so watch your step. 

Oh he has gotten in trouble in the past with paying attention to more then one mare, that was part of the reason he and Stardream broke up.

Edited April 4, 2013 by EquestrianScholar

[Spell Shock 56]

yeah, i remember him. Through this time there will be no Twilight's inqusition busting down doors.

Somewhat.

[Miss Light Diamond 2,803]

@@MagicalStarRain,

@@EquestrianScholar,

 

 

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/star-song-r1880 Okay, her backstory and stuff is all in the Other section. You will also see her new Personality and stuff...how does she look ?

[MagicalStarRain 599]

@,

 

Was Song's family rich? Because only those who could afford the high entrance fee can live in the inner city. Otherwise, you're stuck with the slums of the Undercity. 

[Miss Light Diamond 2,803]

@,

 

Was Song's family rich? Because only those who could afford the high entrance fee can live in the inner city. Otherwise, you're stuck with the slums of the Undercity. 

 

I could say that's what they used their money on...and that's why they needed to do their best to make money in the city.

[HigurSan 195]

So.... Archi and The-Master. Iron Will just appeared outside your encampment. Gonna ignore that?

[GreyScholar 1,584]

Well things seem to be moving forward a bit. Also I just found out that Golden Dawn doesn't seem to exist on this site anymore, talking to a Admin/Mod about it.

[Miss Light Diamond 2,803]

@@EquestrianScholar,

 

 

So how is Star's Bio ? Is there anything I should work on ? Its just up the page a little bit if you missed it. No rush, I was just wondering.

[GreyScholar 1,584]

Oh I completely forgot to post, I did look it over and it seems fine. Normally I would require you to add more to the main Background, such things as a little bit about her parents, her foalhood, and how she got her cutiemark but in this case I would simply encourage. Get an okay from MagicalStarRain and you can play her.

[Miss Light Diamond 2,803]

@@EquestrianScholar,

@@MagicalStarRain,

 

Her foalhood wasn't really interesting...the first little bit of the thing summed it all up. She lived alone and made literally no friends...so she spent her time playing music which is how she got her cutiemark. I will add some stuff about her cutie mark right now.

So how does she look Miss Rain ?

[Spell Shock 56]

Also, so do i need to cross Earthborn borders if i want to go to Dragon land? if so, i will have to send Daawn with a letter to go find dear AJ. Which will take some time

[GreyScholar 1,584]

You could alway get creative and find a way around/over/under Earthborn land, or find those that know how to do so.

Edited April 4, 2013 by EquestrianScholar

[Spell Shock 56]

1) - in Manehatter? Sorry, yeah - that's a good way of being robbed, raped and other "nice" stuff.

2) - I could fly over it on Lightning, but that's kind of harsh.

3) - That would take much longer to do.

4) - Nah.

[MagicalStarRain 599]

@,

 

...Miss Rain? Seriously?!

 

Anyways, I see nothing else wrong with your bio(the only thing I'm wondering is how and where her parents got the money to get into the city and get a house). Otherwise, I think you're good to go. 

[GreyScholar 1,584]

1) - in Manehatter? Sorry, yeah - that's a good way of being robbed, raped and other "nice" stuff.

2) - I could fly over it on Lightning, but that's kind of harsh.

3) - That would take much longer to do.

4) - Nah.

-Rolls Eyes- Not everypony will stab you in the back in that city

Heck I could have Golden Dawn found trust worthy ponies that could help, admittingly part of the reason for that is because of the connections he has. Members tend to work together no matter the city, there could even a pony that 'seem' to be begger but is actually a member..

Edited April 4, 2013 by EquestrianScholar

[Spell Shock 56]

besides, if i underrstand correctly i have a choide of - Everfree or Earthborn. Or changelings... or all three.

[GreyScholar 1,584]

You have a choice on what involving the House Everfree, House Earthborn, or the Changling Swarms?