First pony art on traditional means

[SicklySweetInsanity 34]

http://thedragonsson...fset=0#/d58z0rg

 

http://thedragonsson...fset=0#/d582p6s

 

Well,I kinda want feedback,Whats good? Whats bad? No straight up bashing though please

This is my OC Soulsong,Distant relative to the Princesses and some say she's the princess of music,but its just her talent and special gift

Edited August 29, 2012 by SweetenedDarkness

[PonyEcho 1,610]

first drawing

well the shape of the pony is off and after looking at some of you other art you rely shouldn't have made those mistakes ... oh wait adopted bases never mind.

the body is a bit long and the back legs need to be shaped better, other then that its good.

try using shapes and line to get the it all nice and pony like and use reference images.

 

second drawing

those eyes are scaring the hell out of me, i've never been a fan of that anime style but the design is good.

[Motion Spark 7,807]

well, I don't want to get into specific details, because I will never end this post, there more bads than goods, just keep practicing, keep drawing, I recommend you to trace ponies when you are drawing to get used to their shapes ...

 

the second drawing is super creepy, because of the eyes, first the eyes are really up, that's psysically impossible and second, the eyes are completelly OVER the hair, that makes no sense.

[Alpha Centauri 169]

I think the pony image is good but could use a little work, like others before me have said try to use images as a reference, for example, you say she is a relative of the princesses, so you could use pics of them as guides