First MLP drawing

[ThunderDasher1994 11]

i drew this about a month ago but never took the time to post it, i plan on drawing more pictures and i am really looking for tips/ constructive criticism.. other than that i just drew Fluttershy cause she's my favorite of the Mane 6, hope you like it

[Dimitri Hammer 3,645]

Very pretty. You're a good artist! (Pssst.....good choice on favorite pony, she's my favorite too.) I love what you did with the eyes and hair.

Excellent job Comrade!

[Kalypso 69]

the drawing is good but either the head is to small for the body or the body is to small for the head it could go either way really

[Xero1 124]

This is pretty good. Some minor anatomical errors to note.

The hind legs need to be set back a bit and the dip between flank and leg a little more curvy and more emphasized.

The wings of pegasus when folded generally cover part of thier flank and cutie mark.

the drawing is good but either the head is to small for the body or the body is to small for the head it could go either way really

 

I'd say head is too large for the body since most of the rest of the body is fairly accurate

Her eye look as though they were drawn for a 3/4 view rather than a profile.

 

I love that you colored it in. derpy is best pony of course but fluttershy is a close second for me.

[~Chaos~ 3,967]

This is a very good drawing for your first one, one thing I see is the back of the back leg, it could be a bit more curved if you know what I mean, but if you keep practicing, then you'll get better, trust me on that, just keep drawing (:

[OkBuddy 586]

Wow, this is a really good drawing! Just one thing you might wanna consider fixing next time, the legs. The legs in this drawing is a bit shorter than the ones Fluttershy has. Other than that, excellent work!

[Tiger 12]

Really nice for a first try!

My first try... oh god let's not talk about that shit.

 

The head is too large, the ear is too small, the neck is a bit long (I think? Dunno, I'm not so good at drawing things).

 

But, again, good job! Keep drawing and you'll be better and better.

[tokio767 3]

Very good + cute!

 

The body seems kind of narrow though. Her wing seems kind of big too. No biggie, it's still really good for your first.

[ThunderDasher1994 11]

thanks for all the helpful advice everyone, im currently trying to draw rainbowdash just looking for the right picture to draw inspiration from and will hopefully have it posted here soon

Edited September 25, 2012 by ThunderDasher1994

[Beat Shock 581]

All you need to do right now, is look for pictures of ponies that you could draw off of. If you look at the proportions of the show ponies, you can really learn how to improve.

 

You are really good at drawing them with clean lines, which is what I have trouble with.

 

Another thing, the chest and the hip needs to be closer together. Try to make your pony more cartoony, and round.