writing Just a little bit of venting

[confusedCraftsperson 8]

Okay, so I really have no one to talk to since anyone I talk to either doesn't know anything or is not serious about pursuing a career in music and there is no sort of writing club at my school so I decided to stat posting my stuff here and hope some like it/gives some feedback. So here goes, you guys.

 

Rage

Rage doom

No room

No room

Her head

A cage

A knife

Her key

Blood sets

Her free

Her screams

To tears

Door closed

Freedom lears

Death nears

 

review y/n

Edited October 7, 2012 by confusedCraftsperson