writing Into the fire

[Pan the Fabulous Ferret 2,642]

Let me go.

Let me take my final steps that cannot be undone.

You think that your words are able to solve the worlds problems!

Do you believe in such nonsense?

 

This world shall be enveloped in the creeds of its sanity, which by true means, is insanity.

This world will burn with the fires of desire and greed, and the innocent shall suffer.

Nothing but the foundation of human desire shall be saveed from this inevitable destruction.

 

You declare you are a saint!

Do you believe that to be true?

Begone from me,

leave me to rot in my prison of wanting.

I will see no one, hear no reason, and drown out the worlds problems with my own.

 

I am the only voice I can hear!

Am I a monster?

No, I am a common fault, a blight on the earth.

We are flaws.

 

I have nothing to say to you, the world is ending.

You cast me aside, refused to hear my words.

Now I return the favor, and yet,

all I need do is nothing.

 

I merely laugh at your existence.

You murder the innocent and darken the skies.

YOU, the people.

Words can do little anymore.

Only action and consequence make significance.

 

Leave me be.

Let me rot.

I've nothing left to say.

 

You and your people,

once more you die.

If only death was simple.

If only death came at the end of life.

 

But no,

You will die many times before you end your own life.

Don't blame me for telling you these things.

 

Into the fire,

Regret?

No, you are too stubborn.

 

You die now on the eve of destruction, escaping the worlds problems,

only by burrowing your mind farther into itself.

Escape reality before reality can be realized?

You are either clever or ignorant.

 

Once more into the fire,

I stand at the edge, awaiting my final moments.

For I refuse to face death in life.

I will carry on the burden of your lost souls.

I alone it seems.

 

Prove me wrong...

 

 

 

-David Favret

Edited October 8, 2012 by TheBronyHeart

[VladmireV.S.(Crank) 1,096]

Spot on, my fellow writer! I have to say my friend, it made me feel so emotional when I read it! I have to say thank you, for writing such a beautiful piece, and thank you for giving the world yet another beauty to look upon.

[WhiteLightning 339]

Wow man.. I'm not all that good in writing or languages in general, but you've sure got talent. That actually stirred up some emotions.

[Pan the Fabulous Ferret 2,642]

Spot on, my fellow writer! I have to say my friend, it made me feel so emotional when I read it! I have to say thank you, for writing such a beautiful piece, and thank you for giving the world yet another beauty to look upon.

 

Wow man.. I'm not all that good in writing or languages in general, but you've sure got talent. That actually stirred up some emotions.

 

I am compelled to ask, Just WHAT did this make you feel?

 

I attempted to write this in such a way that made people expel emotion... I actually wrote this wondering how certain peolpe would react to certain lines.

 

So yes, tell me what it made you feel... I am curious!

[VladmireV.S.(Crank) 1,096]

I am compelled to ask, Just WHAT did this make you feel?

 

I attempted to write this in such a way that made people expel emotion... I actually wrote this wondering how certain peolpe would react to certain lines.

 

So yes, tell me what it made you feel... I am curious!

 

At first, I thought it was going to be a poem about loss or past trifle, but then I kept reading, and it made me feel sad because it speaks of the truth, and that realization is very depressing. then, I cried tears of joy because I saw that it was a beautiful piece of artwork, made by a awesome author:3