Crazy Derpy Data (First Attempt at Vectoring)

[Wubsie 1,123]

I got bored and wanted to try vectoring.

I didn't wan't to do Pinkie so I made it my OC. (Data)

I really like it, it's not done yet but so far it looks great.

Here it is:

Criticism is welcome.

I am still working on his hair.

Next: Clarity's OC....

Edit: I have fixed the eye problem.

Edited October 27, 2012 by ~Wubs~

[Rainbow Skywalker 642]

Nice, maybe the sclera could be a bit whiter to show contrast. it kind of looks like the eye just bleeds in with the rest of the body. Also the iris could be just a tad bigger. I couldn't do any better, but just if you wanted to improve on it. It's really good for a first time vector.

[Wubsie 1,123]

Nice, maybe the sclera could be a bit whiter to show contrast. it kind of looks like the eye just bleeds in with the rest of the body. Also the iris could be just a tad bigger. I couldn't do any better, but just if you wanted to improve on it. It's really good for a first time vector.

 

I fixed the eyes thank you Rainbow Skywalker I didn't notice that!

Don't be afraid to criticize!

I really want to make this look really good so I would really appreciate criticism!

[Silverwisp the Bard 2,354]

-Needs a nostril

-needs a lower part for the mane

-horn should be angled a bi more upward and needs some work on the outline

-maybe change his fur to a very bright grey (see Rarity) to different from the eyes

-the ears look a tad small