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Let me try to find my place.

Utter most and innate grace, found in no other.

Much more than grand schemes allow.

Die for anyone…

 

All my tears I beg, on my knees I cry.

 

Nothing left to burn away,

Nothing here or there shall stay, even in our own to be.

Nothing makes such sense as our evening tomorrow.

Such are lies of truth, paradox and by far uncouth.

 

So please look the other way, I shall try to find my place.

 

All hear me, and all see me, torture time itself upon me.

Oh so pure yet oh so much in vain.

All the other eyes appear, no longer in any way may I be sincere.

Your time with me, oh my well spent now, on the eve of morning.

 

So tell me now, how I can be

 

 

 

-David Favret

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Reminds me of Diary of Jane by Breaking Benjamin..

As I burn another page, as I look the other way, I still try to find my place in the Diary of Jane, so tell me how I should be..desperate I will crawl, waiting for so long, no love, there is no love, die for anyone, what have I become...?

 

Very nice as always, my good sir.

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Reminds me of Diary of Jane by Breaking Benjamin..

As I burn another page, as I look the other way, I still try to find my place in the Diary of Jane, so tell me how I should be..desperate I will crawl, waiting for so long, no love, there is no love, die for anyone, what have I become...?

 

Very nice as always, my good sir.

 

That was the song I used as a structure inspiration! Glad you caught that... My favorite song by them by the way.

 

And thus, this poem completes my 5th compilation.

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That was the song I used as a structure inspiration! Glad you caught that... My favorite song by them by the way.

 

And thus, this poem completes my 5th compilation.

 

Ah, excellent. I love Breaking Benjamin.

Give Me A Sign is my favourite, I think.

That and Diary of Jane, of course. First song I ever heard by them.

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