Vector for my new OC

[Lightning Fluttershy 1,844]

So yeah I made a new OC and commemorated it by making a vector for his profile!

 

His name is Gale Force, a 24 year old pegasus (how original I know )

 

 

So what do you guys think? Good? Bad? (Probably bad)

 

Here is his actual profile if any of you are curious.

[Rainbow Skywalker 642]

This is incredible. You should see some of the vectoring I've tried to do. well, actually the vectors I've tried to do were just me trying to replicate each individual part of the pony from the side view. Stuff like the body in one layer, the hooves in another layer etc. But your art on the other hand is perfect. Very Accurate to the show's drawings indeed. The only constructive criticism I could give would be to make your tail gradient start from top to bottom instead of side to side to make it look like the part of the tail closest to his body actually gets whiter as it gets closer to the intersect point with, well, his butt.

 

Also, his eyes are missing those 2 little shiny parts on the edge of the iris. I could send you a file for an eye that I replicated perfectly if you happen to be using Adobe Illustrator.

[Lightning Fluttershy 1,844]

 

This is incredible. You should see some of the vectoring I've tried to do. well, actually the vectors I've tried to do were just me trying to replicate each individual part of the pony from the side view. Stuff like the body in one layer, the hooves in another layer etc. But your art on the other hand is perfect. Very Accurate to the show's drawings indeed. The only constructive criticism I could give would be to make your tail gradient start from top to bottom instead of side to side to make it look like the part of the tail closest to his body actually gets whiter as it gets closer to the intersect point with, well, his butt.

 

Also, his eyes are missing those 2 little shiny parts on the edge of the iris. I could send you a file for an eye that I replicated perfectly if you happen to be using Adobe Illustrator.

 

 

Thanks so much! It makes me feel good when people compliment my art.

As for the eyes, I left out the two little shiny things on purpose. I didn't really like them.

Edited November 14, 2012 by Death the Kid

[Zygen 6,066]

Wow, It looks really nice, I like it. Its very smooth looking, and not to mention the colors are very calming. plus I love how his tail kinda fades to white. And so does his hair.

Not to mention it is very good itself

Kudos and wonderful job! Keep it up!

[Wubsie 1,123]

No iris really on the pony....also the lines are a little thick.

Other than that it's perfect bro.

Nice job on this vector for your OC.

[Silverwisp the Bard 2,353]

Looking good.

His right eye doesn't match the left one's expression

-his left front hoof is a bit to small

- the bend in his right hind leg is too strong

- the tip of the tail should allign with the ground