writing Repetition of love unknown

[Pan the Fabulous Ferret 2,642]

As I lie in the same position,

amongst every day and night.

Counting the limitless stars I see.

One light amongst many.

Life used to be so simple.

 

As I lie face first in the snow,

unable to feel anymore.

Breathing long and slow.

Lost in the vast expanse.

All I know is this redundency.

 

I just want to seek out so much more.

Knowing all that lies in store for me.

Feeling no warmth to keep my tethered here.

Help me, for my hands have grown cold...

 

 

Soft angels breath, along such terms of bliss.

Wings as white as the snow I am buried in.

Voices heard in sweet loves grip.

Eyes of fairer means then most.

Eyes which meet mine, bloodshot and known.

Forever th knowledge of superior Angels I grasp.

Knowing all too well of my own place.

 

Wisps of grace, innate love's inner strength.

Combustable feelings of emotional bliss.

Known only by the fair angels gifted touch.

Wanting to know such a feeling, here I lay.

 

 

Here I lay, every day and night.

Counting the stars, each and every one.

 

-David Favret

[Bari 7,023]

Very lovely. I like how it was descriptive enough for me to properly visualize it. I have one question though. What was your inspiration for this piece?

[Pan the Fabulous Ferret 2,642]

Very lovely. I like how it was descriptive enough for me to properly visualize it. I have one question though. What was your inspiration for this piece?

 

Why do you ask? :x

 

 

The inspiration is the repetition of love unkown. Its really simple.

 

Eyup nothin else too it....

nothin at all.

 

 

hmmm...

 

Okay, so maybe there WAS an inspiration...

 

Maybe, that inspiration revolves around events in my life and possible future events.

Maybe it is about a relationship.

And Maybe I am slightly concerned about certain things.

Perhaps I just needed to put them in words...

 

Very lovely. I like how it was descriptive enough for me to properly visualize it. I have one question though. What was your inspiration for this piece?