writing Deception

[Pan the Fabulous Ferret 2,642]

Do you understand by the words you give to me?

Individible fire alive in your arms.

Can you even comprehend your actions?

All alone in this time, no one else dares to care for you.

Are these the consequences that were forewarned?

 

Every answer will lead to another.

 

Every question will beg to ask one more.

 

At the end of a day when night comes, do you dare to shine?

By the time that these words find meaning, I fear it won't even matter.

Elegance of fate, and philosophy of life.

Without a doubt, and most definitly beyond reason.

 

 

-David Favret

[Bari 7,023]

Beautiful. I love it. Was I supposed to get an evil vibe from it? I can imagine a villain of some kind telling a hero these words before they goes about destroying them.

[Pan the Fabulous Ferret 2,642]

Beautiful. I love it. Was I supposed to get an evil vibe from it? I can imagine a villain of some kind telling a hero these words before they goes about destroying them.

 

UMMMMM.... My stance on my poems are "See what you want to see."

 

While I personally cant see that, I am glad that you at least get that sense from it and enjoyed it.

[Bari 7,023]

UMMMMM.... My stance on my poems are "See what you want to see."

 

While I personally cant see that, I am glad that you at least get that sense from it and enjoyed it.

 

Ah, interpretation is up to the viewer, as is with most art. What did you have in mind when you wrote this, or did you just write down whatever came to mind as it flowed?

[Pan the Fabulous Ferret 2,642]

This one was just random really. I set aside the idea of philosophical deception, and just typed whatever came to mind.

"Inst-ration" i call it.

 

Though, to be really honest, I don't think I did very well on this one

[Bari 7,023]

Well, I rather liked the visuals I got from it. It was nice and simple. Easy to get through as well. Don't feel bad if you don't like it. Not everyone loves everything they make.