writing Never allowed to give up

[Pan the Fabulous Ferret 2,642]

The end.

One in which the end has come again.

All which is soon to be forgotten, oh this greater sin.

It was over far before it ever began, and by such never truly ended.

All that is forsaken, set free without moral constraint.

Im tired of being who I am.

Before it ever began, life itself was here.

Life itself has ended, and now it begins.

Asking oneself of answers.

Finding that pitiful responses are meaningless.

One

All that is needed, and all that was ever wanted.

By words not yet spoken, and by turmoil forcefully sought.

Left alone

Realizing that I've become lost.

Lost in this realm, this world of darkness.

Left for my own demise, and no one is waiting for me.

Not one soul, awaiting my return with open arms.

All my worries that seem so insignificant.

All on my own,

Awaiting the moment I decide to stop caring.

Longing for a day when hopelessness allows oneself to give up.

-David Favret

Edited November 27, 2012 by TheBronyHeart

[Master Blade the Bearded 112]

Every time I read one of your poems, I feel the need to post a reply. But, as usual, I have no words for what your work makes me feel.

[khaine21x3 789]

I instantly thought of rickroll when I saw the title lol.

 

I guess I can identify with this poem, there are days when I feel all alone and lost all hope.

[Pan the Fabulous Ferret 2,642]

Every time I read one of your poems, I feel the need to post a reply. But, as usual, I have no words for what your work makes me feel.

 

I instantly thought of rickroll when I saw the title lol.

 

I guess I can identify with this poem, there are days when I feel all alone and lost all hope.

 

 

Thank you, to both of you. Even if you have no words to offer, the fact that you took the time to read this, brohoof, and leave a comment is more than enough to leave me elated.

[Jokuc 8,173]

I am pretty bad at seing whatäs good and what is bad when it comes to poems and stuff. But I thought this was quite good written.