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Robot Trixie Vector (Looking for critiques)


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Deviant Art version: http://urdeh.deviantart.com/art/Vector-Robot-Trixie-344906659

 

This is a quick vector I did today. However, I think I would like to try different styles (specifically shading styles). So, does anyone have any suggestions?

 

Also, critique on the actual art is much appreciated as well. :P

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Ooooh, this is really nice, there's just so little to critique...

 

I think i might have missed her horn... and the way the front legs look (The hooves look like a triangle) is a little weird :P

 

Other then that, it's really awesome! Very good work!

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Ooooh, this is really nice, there's just so little to critique...

 

I think i might have missed her horn... and the way the front legs look (The hooves look like a triangle) is a little weird :P

 

Other then that, it's really awesome! Very good work!

Uh. Yes there is a reason for the lack of horn. It's not because I forgot it at all.

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As far as the legs go, since there facing forward, it was quite hard to draw the legs the way I wanted. Which is my excuse.

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The technique you use to force the perception of depth is lacking I can't tell if the hind legs are supposed to be to her right and I'm looking at her head on or if you're looking from the side and they're directly behind her.

 

It's a nice vector over all, though.

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i like the concept, but i feel the robotic idea was missed a bit. she still looks very organic and not as mechanical as i was expecting. her eyes are wicked looking though, and i like her stance, so overall its a cool vector. 

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