Shooting star at night

[Sensuna 138]

Ok this is my oc I did it with photoshop and paint tool sai hope you liked it
I also drawn it with only a mouse because I'm really bad with pencils

And please tell me what I should improve or what to change

As always I strongly advise to enlarge it looks way better

Edited January 13, 2013 by Sensuna

[Silverwisp the Bard 2,353]

Mane and tail are excelent, so are the colours.

-the cutiemark should sit a bit lowe, maybe add white or light blue outlines to the stars.

-the right hindleg's outline should be doublecurved (like the left one's)

-the blush should sit a bit lower

-Head and body are a bit out of proportion, look into that (adding an additional layer for proportion (using lines and circles can help a lot)

 

This can be of great help:

 

 

 

 

[kirbyboi 588]

Aaaaw....cute pic! As usual, wonderful! I especially love the background in this one!

 

The one thing I can suggest is to make the blushing around her cheek area. Other than that, I love this drawing, and the effort you put into it is amazing. The background makes it look cool as well!

[Sensuna 138]

Mane and tail are excelent, so are the colours.

-the cutiemark should sit a bit lowe, maybe add white or light blue outlines to the stars.

-the right hindleg's outline should be doublecurved (like the left one's)

-the blush should sit a bit lower

-Head and body are a bit out of proportion, look into that (adding an additional layer for proportion (using lines and circles can help a lot)

 

This can be of great help:

 

 

 

 

 

Thank you a lot for the advice and the critique it's highly appreciated and I know about her head that it is kinda big I never seem to get it top notch for the cutie mark I'll try that another time but I don't know what you mean by "the right hindleg's outline should be doublecurved " how do you mean doublecurved?