writing Luna (non-MLP poem)

[MelancholicMemory 2,025]

Despite the name, this poem is not about the princess. If you want to interpret it that way though, that' s cool too.

 

"Luna"

 

An eerie glow
Through the drifting fog,
Above the meadow and the bog.
The enchanting guardian of the night 
Which brings to many quite a fright.
A howling fills the chilly air
from beasts and creatures everywhere,
Praising the glory of the goddess Luna;
The entrancing stare of the moon.

Edited March 14, 2013 by MelancholicMemory

[Fluttashy 325]

This is really good! I loved your wording when you were describing her presence. I think you did an excellent job and portrayed her character very well.

[MelancholicMemory 2,025]

This is really good! I loved your wording when you were describing her presence. I think you did an excellent job and portrayed her character very well.

Thank you, Twinkleshy! That's very kind of you to say. I actually wrote this just as a general poem about the beauty of the moon before discovering MLP, but it can also apply to Princess Luna very nicely. She' s one of my favorite characters.