My Poem

[Blue Moon 6,341]

I wrote a poem in this topic

http://mlpforums.com/topic/56240-post-something-totally-random/#entry1344739

 

It was completely random and I want to know what you guys think. Here it it:

 

 

Deep in the forest, Caterpillars roam

 

For they must consume the leaves 

 

Upon the tall old trees

 

to become the moth they were meant to be

 

But one caterpillar wanted something different

 

He was tired of everybody being the same

 

So he tried the leaves nobody tries

 

And wrapped himself up in a cocoon

 

When he emerged from this cocoon

 

He was a butterfly

 

His beautiful wings shot a message to others

 

Most caterpillars laughed at the colorful epicene wings

 

But some caterpillars wanted to be like the butterfly

 

So they tried the leaves nobody tries

 

And now we have butterflies.

[~Starlight~ 764]

It's really nice, I like how it's about nature I could imagine Fluttershy saying something like this, it's very nice! Anyways keep up the great work it's really nice!

[Blue Moon 6,341]

It's really nice, I like how it's about nature I could imagine Fluttershy saying something like this, it's very nice! Anyways keep up the great work it's really nice!

Thanks. I didn't really have nature in mind when I wrote this though. I was thinking of something else besides nature when I wrote it.

[~Starlight~ 764]

Thanks. I didn't really have nature in mind when I wrote this though. I was thinking of something else besides nature when I wrote it.

 

Well it's still really good I really like it anyways! What ever you had in mind it would be the perfect inspiration for a poem anyways! 

[Blue Moon 6,341]

Well it's still really good I really like it anyways! What ever you had in mind it would be the perfect inspiration for a poem anyways! 

Think of metaphors when reading it. You may figure out the meaning behind it if you pay attention closely.

 

Well thanks anyway for the positive feedback.