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... I'm confused. Perhaps it was all the cuts made but your idea isn't making much sense. Also which parts had Princess Celestia?

 

I will still need to do some reading but I may be able to add a chatacter into this, my one of my pony OCs or maybe a human.

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To everyone else I'd like to say "Greetings". I'm flattered that I've been invited to participate in part 2.

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Before any of you ask, yes, I invited EquestrianScholar!

 

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Sorry, I had to get off for a bit, but the idea is that Colette and the other Pony Finders will go to Equestria in the sequel, and they're gonna meet the princesses, and Colette made a video that pretty much illustrated her fear of meeting them in a humorous two part video that she doesn't want the princesses to see--especially Part Two!

 

That being said, it'll be open dibs on which princess gets to see the vids first!

 

I won't be introducing any more humans in the sequel, as all of the Equestrians have been found, but we will need new Equestrians of all kinds!

 

I'd better get working on my next post, then!

 

And random brohoof, 'cause my phone's slow and whatnot!

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@@EquestrianScholar,

 

Twilight Sparkle, Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy are currently being played by ,

 

Pinkie Pie and Rarity are being played by @Pripyat Pony,

 

I'm playing Applejack,

 

and is playing Queen Chrysalis.

 

Cinder will be playing Princess Celestia in the sequel, and @00Pony will playing Princess Luna.

 

I sent Cinder a sitrep, which I will copy and edit, as my phone doesn't like quoting:

 

Rainbow Dash was found by my character, Colette Irving ,

 

~Shadow Wolf~'s character Catherine Bellamy found Applejack,*

 

00Pony's character Logan Kieffer found Twilight Sparkle,

 

Pinkie Pie found my character Colette,*

 

Pripyat Pony's character Claire (last name forgot) found 00Pony's character Changeling captain Diliges,

 

My character Stephen Hagemann found Pripyat's character Cicada, the Changeling commander,*

 

Fireblaze's character Charles Roberts found Rarity,

 

The Original PWD's character Magneus (last name forgot) found Fluttershy, but Stephen's twin Shawn flown her to America,

 

And Meteorite's character found Queen Chrysalis!*

 

* I've forgotten the names of some of some of the former RPers, who were the original Finders, as they have long since left the RP... ((If any of you wanna say a few words about your characters, by all means, do so! I'll say a few things about mine in my next OOC post!))

 

The Mane6 have been caught up in a spell cast by Queen Chrysalis to send them to another dimension--but she too, along with her second in command, and a captain of her Changeling army were caught up in the spell with her. They were all separated and given human form upon arriving on Earth. The humans subsequently found them, and took care of them to the best of their ability.

 

The Equestrians, in the meanwhile adapted somewhat, but Dash and Fluttershy were by far the most adaptable, as Rainbow Dash created a Tumblr page, and was well on the way of starting a Youtube page, as she has a sizeable following--something I want to see realized before the end of this RP! Fluttershy initially had a job in a pet store, but wound up getting fired, but she quickly landed a position as a volunteer in a hospital in Scotland.

 

Rainbow Dash was by far the most curious, The other Ponies weren't nearly as ambitious, which is a major part of why it was such a shock to see Dawn go, as he played both Pegasai.

 

Incidentally, most of the Ponies fell love with the humans --Fluttershy and Colette are an item in this RP, and if luck would have it, will continue to be so in the sequel. Rainbow Dash is with Nioniosbbbb's character Dennis Priestjohn, Rarity is with Charles, Applejack's with Logan, and Pinkie Pie's with Charles' cousin Nick Roberts.(?)

 

Twilight, Cicada, and Diliges are still single.

 

The Ponies and their finders eventually meet up with, go to a tire test, a race, and have several parties. The queen and David, however, remained isolated and went to Miami. Little did any of them know, they were being watched by two groups of agents--both extra governmental, sbd very dangerous.

 

These agents are being played by 00Pony and myself. A third agent, Agent Louise Burton, is being played by Pripyat Pony--Burton's sided with the Finder Party. The other agents, however, are still very antagonistic-- my agents' leader Abernathy, especially!

 

00Pony's agents struck first and abducted Queen Chrysalis. She managed to alert her subordinates, which prompted a rescue party to be formed, consisting of 00's characters Logan, Angie, Diliges and Twilght (at the moment),my characters Stephen, Shawn, and Applejack, and Pripyat's character Cicada.

 

They all embarked on a two day road trip, only to stop at the end of the first night at a motel. This motel however, was being run by 00's agents, and they soon threw the place into chaos, with intent to kill the humans and capture the Equestrians.

 

This prompted Cicada to test Twilight's powers, which surprisingly hadn't used her powers much to that point --which resulted in a few people being turned into plants for a few hours, a la Cutie Mark Chronicles. I'll PM ya later as to why! The queen meanwhile, used some magic of her own and cast a spell to make any non-magic user, basically the humans and the Changelings, more resistant to gunfire. Think of it as a magic bulletproof vest!

 

Despite the commotion, most of the rescue party, henceforth known as Rescue Team Alpha, managed to escape without so much as a scratch thanks to Plot Armor!

 

Cicada however, stayed behind and fought a few of the agents off, and got injured in the process. Stephen and Diliges doubled back to retrieve her, and thankfully escaped unharmed.

 

Anyhoots, this led to the most recent post, where one of the agents, Sebastian Connery, has commandeered a helicopter, and is about to join the party and save the queen!

 

Which brings us to Rescue Team Beta. They were formed by my character Colette, Shadow's character Catherine, Fireblaze's characters Nick and Charles, and Nios' character Dennis.

 

Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Rarity, and Pinkie Pie were all abducted after a race by my agents, and were taken to an isolated, secure facility, where Pripyat's agent Louise wreaked havoc on the security systems, giving the Ponies the chance to escape.

 

As you would expect, the agents were soon after them, chasing them into the woods that surrounded the facility. Abernathy tranqed Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie twisted her ankle, leading to their recapture. Rarity and Fluttershy escaped to a gas station, where Louise met up with, and took them back to Colette and the others, and joining the rescue team.

 

Rescue Team Beta then immediately drove back out to the facility, snuck in via use of an invisibility spell Rarity cast, rescued Dash and Pinkie, knocked Abernathy out, then Louise locked her in a cell, then they all drove out to Catherine's place, which just so happens to be a modern style mansion in Los Angeles.

 

And this brings us up to speed on Rescue Team Beta, as for right now, they're just shopping at a high end mall.

 

This downtime is to better help Rescue Team Alpha to rescue the queen and catch up. I will also allow a few days of more downtime afterward to allow for character development for both the queen and Twilight, as both were under utilized in the RP.

 

This also will bring the opportunity for the Queen to help Twilight use her Alicorn magic more reliably, as she will need her help in getting all of the Equestrians home.

 

I hope this helps!

 

@@00Pony, @, @@Pripyat Pony, @, @,

 

I have a very nasty surprise planned for the Pony party, but I want everyone and everypony together first!

 

That being said, we need to bring RTA up to speed, 00! There's only so much you can do with shopping!

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I can confidently say I will have a post before next week. Hopefully tomorrow, or Wednesday, best case scenario.


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"Do not judge, or you too will be judged. For in the same way you judge others, you will be judged, and with the measure you use, it will be measured to you." -- Matthew 7:1

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@, @, @,

 

Right now, RTB's just putzing around in the mall--Colette just took Fluttershy to the same spa that Cat, Pinkie, and Rarity are in, and I dunno where Dennis and Dash are, but I know Dennis played the piano…

 

@,

 

Sorry, we're closed for now, but there will be a sequel, and I will need new players!

 

Random video break time! Once again from one of my favorite Youtubers!

 

Darkiplier & Creepy Moments of Markiplier:

 

I can totally see Colette doing something like this!

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I'm about halfway done with my post as of now, and will complete and upload it sometime tomorrow. My phone's running close to death and I am without power at the moment. Sorry for the long delay.


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"Greater love, hath no man than this, that he would lay down his life for his friends." -- John 15:13

"Do not judge, or you too will be judged. For in the same way you judge others, you will be judged, and with the measure you use, it will be measured to you." -- Matthew 7:1

"If you can't fly then run, if you can't run then walk, if you can't walk then crawl, but whatever you do you have to keep moving forward." -- Martin Luther King Jr.

Rest In Peace, Monty OumWe'll keep moving forward.

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My post has been slower coming than I'd like. I've hit a stumbling block in two ways. One, I'm trying to figure out how to make dialogue between Sebastian and Kai'sa make sense. And two, clap came up that stunted my progress. But it will happen before long, if my word means anything


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"Greater love, hath no man than this, that he would lay down his life for his friends." -- John 15:13

"Do not judge, or you too will be judged. For in the same way you judge others, you will be judged, and with the measure you use, it will be measured to you." -- Matthew 7:1

"If you can't fly then run, if you can't run then walk, if you can't walk then crawl, but whatever you do you have to keep moving forward." -- Martin Luther King Jr.

Rest In Peace, Monty OumWe'll keep moving forward.

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@@00Pony, @, @@Pripyat Pony, @, @,

 

Sooo looking forward to your post, 00! We gotta get the queen's rescue underway, so we can finally reach the end!

 

In the meantime however, Nios and I gave Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash a bit of an opportunity for a bit of dialogue and character development.

 

After that, depending on whether or not 00 posts, we can get the clothes shopping done in earnest…

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In case you somehow missed it on the Main Thread, my post is live!


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"Greater love, hath no man than this, that he would lay down his life for his friends." -- John 15:13

"Do not judge, or you too will be judged. For in the same way you judge others, you will be judged, and with the measure you use, it will be measured to you." -- Matthew 7:1

"If you can't fly then run, if you can't run then walk, if you can't walk then crawl, but whatever you do you have to keep moving forward." -- Martin Luther King Jr.

Rest In Peace, Monty OumWe'll keep moving forward.

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@@00Pony, @, @, @@Pripyat Pony,

 

FINALLY~!! You post, 00!

 

Working on my (hopefully) giant post now!

 

Gotta work in Applejack's incredible strength, on top of Twilight's powers.

 

Speaking of which, as just a reminder, Twilight hasn't used her powers much in this RP, and as such, whilst she's doubtlessly powerful, her Alicorn magic is unstable. Go ahead and have Twilight use her magic, but keep that in mind!

 

As a way to give both her and the queen a but more screen time, Queen Chrysalis is going to help her focus her powers before they head home…

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@,

 

Hells yeah! I have a slightly older Toshiba tablet, but it does the job just fine!

 

I should have my next post up soon!

 

@@00Pony,

 

If you want, you can shorten your posts like.the last one so that you can be more active in the RP, and it won't take as long to post…

 

@, @,

 

I'll be waiting for you guys once I get my post up! There's an opportunity for all of your characters to interact, Cinder!

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I'm changing Cat's look a bit. I've been thinking about it and I never really thought the original pic had soft enough features, so here you go. Also, I was about to get her hair dyed anyway while we were at the mall

 

 

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Just think of her with deeper blue eyes and slightly lighter hair

 


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Hello, hi, yeah, not dead just experiencing some block. I'll try for sometime before Monday


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"Greater love, hath no man than this, that he would lay down his life for his friends." -- John 15:13

"Do not judge, or you too will be judged. For in the same way you judge others, you will be judged, and with the measure you use, it will be measured to you." -- Matthew 7:1

"If you can't fly then run, if you can't run then walk, if you can't walk then crawl, but whatever you do you have to keep moving forward." -- Martin Luther King Jr.

Rest In Peace, Monty OumWe'll keep moving forward.

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@@00Pony, @, @@Pripyat Pony, @, @, @@EquestrianScholar,

 

This is another one of those "I'm-posting-this-whilst-I-wait-for-someone-else-to-post" moments.

 

Keep in mind that this is just a first draft of the summary of the sequel-- therefore will need TONS of work, so I'd like everyone's input, so feel free to drop suggestions as to what the Equestrians may be doing, and I'll incorporate it into the next draft!

 

Also, I can't come up with a name for the sequel, so suggestions are appreciated!

 

It has been four months since the Equestrians safely returned home. Life for the Finders is going back to normal for the most part, save for ththe fact that their names are now well known amongst the Brony community.

 

Many of the Finders formed relationships with the Ponies, and as such, there is without a doubt a hole in their hearts from the separation…

 

Just when all seems like they will never see the Ponies again, they all receive mysterious scrolls inviting them to go back to the meteorite…

 

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All of Equestria is abuzz as news from Canterlot tells of a group of most unusual visitors are going to meet with all four Princesses, as they are rumored to have found and taken in the Mane6, and are to be publically honored. Anypony who's anypony will be in attendance, as these guests are rumored to be the legendary beasts known as humans…

 

Some Finders have opted to become Ponies, whilst others have chosen to remain as their alien selves, giving any and all a good look at what these aliens look like.

 

Add to that, they've brought along techology that outshines anything found in Equestria…

 

With this in mind, Celestia has since assigned several Equestrians* from all over her kingdom to closely monitor the aliens' activities, whrn she is not able to do so herself, even having them interact with the aliens, as if the Harmony Bearers' word is anything to go by, what they possess could prove to be both awesome and terrifying…

 

That's all I have for the moment, but I'll add more when I think of something!

 

I would also like to give the humans--the ones that remain human-- something that only they can do, aside from Colette's guitar playing, but I'm unsure as to how to go about that. Again, your ideas are welcome!

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Hmm, I have been having doubts/second thoughts about joining this roleplay. One thing in particular I have been in disagreement of, though I haven't voiced such until now, is the human/pony relationships.

 

From the more recent update above I have concerns of human technology being brought over. Has no one heard the rule about not bringing technology from a more tech advanced place to a less tech advance place?

 

Just, well, there are parts of this roleplay/setting I cannot see myself in agreement with and thus becoming a part of.

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Hmm, I have been having doubts/second thoughts about joining this roleplay. One thing in particular I have been in disagreement of, though I haven't voiced such until now, is the human/pony relationships.

 

From the more recent update above I have concerns of human technology being brought over. Has no one heard the rule about not bringing technology from a more tech advanced place to a less tech advance place?

 

Just, well, there are parts of this roleplay/setting I cannot see myself in agreement with and thus becoming a part of.

A)I think its only 3 but in any case this could change with a four month absence.

B)Equestria has technology but most of it is in Magical form

C)Talk it out... We could work this out maybe... Who knows.

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A)I think its only 3 but in any case this could change with a four month absence.

B)Equestria has technology but most of it is in Magical form

C)Talk it out... We could work this out maybe... Who knows.

1. You mean the players that have human characters in relationships with canon ponies have not been apart of the roleplay recently?

2. Yes but the advancement of Equestria technology is different for the very fact their is magic. Heck the lack of electricity and the likely use of magic as an energy source is one reasonable problem. There is also the worry of introducing technology that can actually be dangerous or harmful to ponies and Equestria if introduced.

 

3. Perhaps so, though I would have to read through as much information I can so as to offer a fuller list of questions and (possible) concerns.

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